Wow...I nearly cried reading this...I know I've said that good handful of times before concerning your work but seriously, this broke me down.
First off, I'm sorry for everything that happened...
And I didn't think I would be able to comprehend because the first stanza was a bit vague but once you moved into the second (particularily here: "How everything changed while we were out of it"), I started to understand it more. I liked the last two lines the most...though very My Chemical Romance emo-like, it was still very fitting. Good work, Brad...you know I loved it.
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,568 Literary Works • 673,442 Reviews
