The piece of me thats you.

by Boolovesyou

  • Poetry
  • Dramatic

Published June 20, 2011

In Dramatic Poems

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The piece of me thats you.

Deep down
(Where I’m dark and twisty)
light is found

A piece that glows,
(that makes me whole)
It stands out from the shadows

A part of me thats you;
(that keeps me together)
holds me together like glue

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GrandmaMuffin
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GrandmaMuffin commented Comment · Jul 10, 2011

What everyone else in front of me said.

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BluesClues
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BluesClues commented Comment · Jun 21, 2011

I love the line "where I'm all dark and twisty." I'm not even sure why, I just do. :)

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freewritersavvy
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freewritersavvy commented Comment · Jun 20, 2011

Very nice! I like it!

Keep writing,
~FW~

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blondeshorty01
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blondeshorty01 wrote a review Review · Jun 20, 2011

this was wonderfuly short and easy to read, you have a gift to gt a point across in a few lines, whereas it takes me a few stana's to do so, it was really good and i loved it! i loved the rhyming, it made it sweet, simple, and it flowed nicely, keep it up!!! :)



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