You don’t think it hurts?
You don’t think I cried?
Or spent endless hours
Remembering our Good-bye
You don’t think I hated you?
You don’t think I forgave you?
After all we had been through
Did I even mean shit to you?
Does it even matter
That we ever loved?
Because at the end of day
I’m here, and you’re far, far away.
I can push you
As far away as I want,
but in my heart
You’ll never leave.
Like a virus
You’ve infected me.
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Alrighty hun, I really like the emotion in this, its simple and sweet. I mean its from the heart and not from the brain. I can see how bad you must have felt from what that person did to you. But I have one little thing I want talk to you about.
Really other then that one thing, its something I really liked and will enjoy to read more from you! Thanks for your time!
~~Randi
Hey there:)
First of all, I want to start by saying that I love the way you wrote the poem and the way it was structured. The words really spoke to me and to me, that is a really important thing to be able to do in a poem. If you don't mind I think we should exchange stories about our past experiences with this. I would really love to hear about it.
keep writing,
Rememberdecemeber