Young Writers Society

Hello!!

First and foremost, thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece. It captured the very core of my soul. To be honest, your poem brought me to different places and corners that I never knew even existed (which is so cool by the way.)

I could feel that every word written was heartfelt, which made me recall the moments I have experienced, which are closely related to those situations you've mentioned in the poem.

To add strength to your work, you may still add more situations and images Nonetheless, I really loved your poem. It is something I'll always look forward to reading.

Continue to write more of these!!

Hey, thank you for sharing this poem and I'll try to do my best at reviewing it.
I loved the heartbreak and hurt feelings portrayed in the poem, it really touches the reader. I think it's a fabulous poem but to improve, maybe you could split it into two stanzas,the first one exploring the "ecstatic" feelings and the second exploring the sadder feelings.
My favourite line was the last by the way.
Thanks and I hope this was a good review.