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wow. i read every one of your writings, i sigh that wishful sigh so many times because of your writings. i love them! the way you put them in a lyric from. i liked how much you put your self into them, your emotion, your words are sooo sad, and yet angry at the very same time.
my favorite is this one though, the way you put your sadness into this? makes me want to run and give you a really, really big hug,and to make sure you smilie in till your face and mouth hurt, from it!
" I've got nobody they call me a street child" is i think is fulled with the most sadness of the whole thing.
"i've got nobody" to me it means that to you, yourself think your no one, when i know you are some one great.
" they call me a street child" i think what you're saying means that some people may think that your a freak, wanna-be, or maybe just plain insane, but i love each and every one of you pieces of writings.
you're really good, please keep writing pieces like this!
- VampyIrishgirl!!
Hey babe,
Heres the scoop. I like. you're pretty consistant. I could see this being a good song. Only one thing to look at. You're rhyming (kind of) Here:
Maybe it’s misery at old age
Yet I’m just 15
It feels much longer in this position
Feels like an eternity
I’ve got no one
They say I’m a dick
They leave my astray
Leave me for the sick
But you don;t have a rhyme scheme in the rest of the song. Just something to look at
Love you.
Emote