Why do you girls have to be mad?
I really wanna know your name
I only want to get your number
And it’s summer, darling
You’ll forget my name within a day
Try to get away, not the other way
Why must you reject me like this?
You & me to the dancefloor now!
We are so alike, baby, hear me
I’m touched by your charms (charms)
We would have such a good time
And we would be so happy
I asked for your favourite Justin Bieber song
You feel that he should burn in hell (that makes you great!)
That makes you great! Even if you are
Obsessed with your blackberry
“OMG Rihanna has just been married!”, and I felt angry:
“Chris Brown is the shit, he can fuck me anywhere!”
We are so alike, baby, hear me
I’m touched by your charms (my pulse rate’s doubling up)
We would have such a good time
And we would be so happy
How pathetic am I? I kinda deserve to die
So I’ll write songs and namedrop you (in the chorus)
How stupid am I? Convinced about your lies
I will laugh out loud when I shock you
It’s a rotten task, but all I need
Is your smile, then my life is worthwhile
What else can I say? I’m trapped now, within your eyes
I plead to recover my sense, so I can understand
So I can be a proper man
But that would be nice if it weren’t for your lips
The ones that always make me twitch
Like false prayers, like them nay sayers
I’ll be your Han Solo if you be my princess Leia
We are so alike, baby, hear me
I’m touched by your charms (your charms)
We would have such a good time
And we would be so happy
(we are so alike) We are so alike
(we are so alike) By your charms
We would have such a good time
And we would be so happy
I laughed at your portrayal of the common reaction to really Pop Culture.
This is a joke, but if I was a girl I would say something like
"Chris Brown could beat me anywhere!"
That was uncalled for.
How you mentioned Rhianna and the Blackberry I liked.
At least you didn't mention twerking.
That would be a perfect pick-up line
"You can twerk on me anywhere"
I do like the lyrics and it made me crack a smile
Dr Strangelove gives it
I dont rate lyrics, but -siskel & ebert thumbs up-
Good job
Wow! This is great
D HAHA! So, you are some kind of a song composer eh?
HAHAHA and yeah, you mentioned some names here and how the girl reacted to these singers (based on how you said it on the lyrics) which I think is your opinion too about these singers but, shouldn't be taken seriously that much It's comical and fun, and I can imagine that you can really make a lively tune out of this.
Well, first of all, the lyrics are long, so I assume this kind of lyrics will go well with fast tempo, fast beats, disco or dance-pop genre of music, like that.
Well, I am sorry if I don't kinda get it how the title became Bugs Bunny
- SM31
Yo, Adam!
This piece has that somewhat-witty-somewhat-comical sort of vibe coming from it. It's playful and a little silly and I can imagine it being a good tune to jive and dance to.
From the last paragraph, I would say, you just need to cut of the second 'we are so alike' that's in brackets. That's all. Apologies if I don't sound as critique-ish as I should be, but lyrics for me are difficult to actually criticize because the way it would sound to me and how it should originally sound to the writer would be totally different. Having said that, the words are cool and don't need to be taken too seriously.
All the best with composing the rest of the songs, Adam. I quite liked this thing.
Murtuza