Holy eyes, fifteen years
You continue to amaze me
Yet it would, be so wrong
To call you my baby
I have, been making
Good time for limited use
But that’s not, saying much
Because I know I’ll lose
Why must this world so epically suck?
I just wanna talk to you about this love
And I would help you, if you let me know
I’m on your mind now, you’re in my zone
I hate to say, that I think
You lied all this time
Yet temptation, has lead me
To seek beyond my eyes
Sure you’re really, and I know
You’re just like me alright
But a certain, uneasiness tells me
To stop wasting my time
Why must this world so epically suck?
I just wanna talk to you about this love
And I would help you, if you let me know
I’m on your mind now, you’re in my zone
I must be thickle, but I contrast my true feelings
You’re on some writer’s forum, I’m only a member
This isn’t really love at all, is it?
My mind is splattered all over and dismembered
And I pray for you for tomorrow
I wish you best in your future endeavours
But I can’t change for you
I can’t change for anyone ever
If you tell, I will be shocked
Because I know you are in love
With me, but truth is, should I care?
No question of why, but a question of where?
I have no, desire to work, to be with you tonight
But that’s my honesty, don’t you hate my honesty?
Why must this world so epically suck?
I just wanna talk to you about “us”
And I would help you, if you let me know
I’m on your mind now, you’re in my zone
I’m on your mind now, you’re in my zone
wow I really like this, the structure is well put together and you can more or less feel the emotion in the lryics. I don't really review this sort of stuff usually as Im not very good at it. got to say this has been the only lyrical piece that has drawn me in if im totally honesty. I'll deffo look through your other pieces you seem very talented in your writing! Definitely keep it up , great work
I like this, expessically the last two lines.