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last week's snows

by Arcticus

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Points: 158
Reviews: 3

Fri Jan 15, 2021 6:49 am
NateAtNight wrote a review...

Hi Arcticus!
I think this is a great poem. I've only recently moved to a snowy area, but I feel it was such a relatable piece of writing anyway. I love how you kind of do a Since You Didn't Do This, So And So Did This. I love how you described the ice in the driveway.
I'm definitely going to read more of your work!

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Points: 133
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Thu Jan 14, 2021 8:09 am
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Divyansh Dubey wrote a review...

Hi @articus
This is completely mesmerizing price of work as it has a lot of relevance with the present situation of snow and ice. I appreciate your sence understanding and gratitude towards the acts of nature. The way you have pictured the sheet of ice to be white granite, is admirable. I am very happy by the way you have used the acts of everyday to make a humorous poem. It was altogether very good and entertaining.
Looking forward for more work from you.

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