Hi Arcticus! I think this is a great poem. I've only recently moved to a snowy area, but I feel it was such a relatable piece of writing anyway. I love how you kind of do a Since You Didn't Do This, So And So Did This. I love how you described the ice in the driveway. I'm definitely going to read more of your work! Nate
Hi @articus This is completely mesmerizing price of work as it has a lot of relevance with the present situation of snow and ice. I appreciate your sence understanding and gratitude towards the acts of nature. The way you have pictured the sheet of ice to be white granite, is admirable. I am very happy by the way you have used the acts of everyday to make a humorous poem. It was altogether very good and entertaining. Looking forward for more work from you. Divyansh.
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