harvest of light

Firstly I am in love with the illustration that goes along with this beautiful poem. Secondly, so much is said in a concise manner which is very impressive. There's really nothing to critique at all in my opinion. There's such wonderful imagery that transports you to a world that you created here. To compare stars to "little silver roses in blossom" is so unique I've never heard anything like that before!

"powdered to glitter / by distance" again, unique, I just adore the flow of that sentence. This whole poem feels like a much needed hug and makes me think of every person I care for and love deeply.

"There's a harvest / of light / somewhere / in the heavens/ your arms reach out, / longing / to share/ in their hope" = perfection, and is so sweet because I read it as comparing someone's loving arms to Heaven and that was very effortlessly done

Such a beautiful piece, I definitely want to read more

I love stars. I love this poem. I love that picture.




In short, everything was lovely.

So beautifully formatted! I love the illustration, its adorable. This poem fills me with wonder *o*

This is a good poem.

Hi @Arcticus I'm here to do a short review for you, ahead of time if this is bad real sorry, I mite be out of practice. I also want to apologize for my spelling, I have trouble with it.

Anyway I loved how you started out, also I just want to say I agree with @penngreen4776 about it being easy to read, for me its in a different way, some poems not to many but some I struggle to follow though, like the meaning of the poem, its sometimes a little hard for me to understand, But this one was great I could follow it with eas, and it was not to short ether. some poems I read I just to short and I always wish that there was more to ad to it. This one at the end of it I really thought that you had done a great job, because I didn't feel this erge to ad more to it.
I found this poem very captivating to, there was like a feeling that made me want to read on, every line flowed real well.

Anyway I don't want to bore you with my compliments I just want to let you no that I really liked it. This is all that I can say, I really loved this poem and hope to read more in the future.

I hope that you have a great Day/Night

@Vulcanite siring over the green room sparing shards of reviews as she went

Oh, hello! I'm penn.

This is surprisingly easy for me to read. I mean that in the nicest way possible, my brain sometimes just doesn't translate poems properly and my eyes suffer for it.

But enough about me! You have a little something I'm a fan of. It's, what's the word, imagination! The comparisons of stars as silver roses is a pleasant picture to behold in my mind, and with their pollen/powder glittering it suddenly gets brighter. "Harvesting light" makes me think of something like a celestial florist, collect stars and turning them into galaxies or nebulas. Nebulae?

I can only imagine wanting to harvest the stars, and luckily, you've helped me do that! Ten outta ten, penn out.