In a world so bright
How can i feel so dull?
In a relation of love,
Is there any at all?
You act like I'm the sun
But you keep me in the night.
Stuck in the shadows
Feelin' like a mistake.
I don't know whether,
to run, or stay in mute.
Feel like you don't love me,.
Not sure that you do.
I thought when i said yes,
It'd be fantastic endevor.
But the sun is gone, honeymoon over.
Now a nightmare, hiding under the covers.
You say you love me.
That I'm your baby.
But instead of feelin' like a lady.
I feel like a maybe.
Maybe you love me?
Maybe you're unsure.
Part of me wants to leave
But I know I won't make it to the door.
Kiss me in the night.
Say that you love me.
Always being a secret.
Nobody knows me.
I don't need fancy or shiny things.
But when the suns out,
I just wish you would hold me.
So I'll put on the "I'm Okay." face.
I'll stick around for a for some days.
I feel forgotten
In these shadows.
Watching you and girls.
I have nothing to say.
I just want to pull you away.
But i know nothings suppose to change.
Kiss me in the shadows.
In the dark of night,
I'm your dirty little secret.
Leave me out to dry.
I don't need fancy things.
Just a hug goodnight.
Say you love me
And I might be alright.
Say your protecting me.
But I feel forgotten.
You're in a relationship.
Still acting single.
I really agree with the other two comments on her your a great writer and I found this poem touching... It almost sent shivers through out me... minor mistakes can always be fixed too...
Don't ever stop writing you have some great potential and your good..
This is good. I noticed the one error that Stellabeam pointed out, but nothing more. I love poetry, and this poem conveys a lot of emotion to something that everyone goes through. I feel that it's a brilliant work simply because it's easy to relate to. Nice work.
I like what you're trying to convey in this poem, I can feel the hurt because my best friend went through something like that. Quick question in the part, "it a relation of love,
is there any at all?" do you mean " in a relation of love?" Other than that it was great!
yeah thats what i meant. thanks