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Ang aking aso, Hugo (My dog, Hugo) [Filipino poem]

by AkuRashomon


Ang aking aso, Hugo

Siya ay may malaking puso

Darating siya sa akin pag gusto ko

Asong na sobrang gwapo

Mahal kita kahit mabaho ang pagkain mo

Wag ka mag magreklamo

Bawal kang ng tsokolate at queso

Pinapatay mo ang sarili mo

Magandang aso siya

Kaya ako ay nagsulat ng tula

Para sa kanya

Hugo, mahal kita

English Version:

My dog, Hugo

He has a big heart

He will come to me when I want

Very handsome dog

I love you even if your food stinks

Don't complain

Chocolate and queso are not allowed

You are killing yourself

He is a good dog

So I wrote a poem

For him

Hugo, I love you


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Tue Dec 12, 2023 3:03 am
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alpacaboss wrote a review...



YOU'RE FILIPINOOOO??? WOOOO AKO RIN! *squealllsss*

Sige magtataglish ako sa review nito. Pasensya na kung may grammatical errors ako hehe

Ang aking aso, Hugo

Siya ay may malaking puso

Darating siya sa akin pag gusto ko

Asong na sobrang gwapo


Unang una, sobrang cute ni Hugo. Nakikita ko naman na mabait sya, gwapo, at ang laki ng puso nya. Sigurado rin ako na mahal na mahal ka niya.


Mahal kita kahit mabaho ang pagkain mo

Wag ka mag magreklamo

Bawal kang ng tsokolate at queso

Pinapatay mo ang sarili mo


You really care for him kasi ineendure mo yung pagkabaho ng pagkain nya at binabantayan mo sya. I could see you gently reprimanding him like, "Hugo, wag mo kainin yan" HAHAHAH


Magandang aso siya

Kaya ako ay nagsulat ng tula

Para sa kanya

Hugo, mahal kita


Ang wholesome talaga tong poem na ito. I really love it!!


Overall, ang cute at nakakatuwa itong poem na to. Napangiti ako habang binabasa ito. Keep it up!!




AkuRashomon says...


Maraming salamat po! Opo, cute talaga siya and mahal na mahal ko si Hugo. Hindi ko alam Pilipino ka. May sakit sa lalamunan ko lol



alpacaboss says...


Di ko rin naexpect na Pilipino ka rin hehe

Hala get well soon! :>



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aww this is so sweet
and though I don't understand/know Filipino i'll still review it!

one: things i liked
ending with hugo, I love you is so nice, and is a perfect way do end, as you started with my dog hugo has a big heart.

Also saying how chocolate and cheese kill pubbies (i have a dog i wish i could give im chocolate.


two: things i disliked
i have no real complaints with this. this is such a cute and wholesome poem and i love your puppy hugo...

three:
uhh i dont know what to say but this was a great poem and i hope to see more of hugo

-tea




AkuRashomon says...


Thank you! It's good that I'm typing this message about I have a sore throat lol



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