Ang aking aso, Hugo
Siya ay may malaking puso
Darating siya sa akin pag gusto ko
Asong na sobrang gwapo
Mahal kita kahit mabaho ang pagkain mo
Wag ka mag magreklamo
Bawal kang ng tsokolate at queso
Pinapatay mo ang sarili mo
Magandang aso siya
Kaya ako ay nagsulat ng tula
Para sa kanya
Hugo, mahal kita
English Version:
My dog, Hugo
He has a big heart
He will come to me when I want
Very handsome dog
I love you even if your food stinks
Don't complain
Chocolate and queso are not allowed
You are killing yourself
He is a good dog
So I wrote a poem
For him
Hugo, I love you
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YOU'RE FILIPINOOOO??? WOOOO AKO RIN! *squealllsss*
Sige magtataglish ako sa review nito. Pasensya na kung may grammatical errors ako hehe
Unang una, sobrang cute ni Hugo. Nakikita ko naman na mabait sya, gwapo, at ang laki ng puso nya. Sigurado rin ako na mahal na mahal ka niya.
You really care for him kasi ineendure mo yung pagkabaho ng pagkain nya at binabantayan mo sya. I could see you gently reprimanding him like, "Hugo, wag mo kainin yan" HAHAHAH
Ang wholesome talaga tong poem na ito. I really love it!!
Overall, ang cute at nakakatuwa itong poem na to. Napangiti ako habang binabasa ito. Keep it up!!
Maraming salamat po! Opo, cute talaga siya and mahal na mahal ko si Hugo. Hindi ko alam Pilipino ka. May sakit sa lalamunan ko lol
Di ko rin naexpect na Pilipino ka rin hehe
Hala get well soon! :>
aww this is so sweet
and though I don't understand/know Filipino i'll still review it!
one: things i liked
ending with hugo, I love you is so nice, and is a perfect way do end, as you started with my dog hugo has a big heart.
Also saying how chocolate and cheese kill pubbies (i have a dog i wish i could give im chocolate.
two: things i disliked
i have no real complaints with this. this is such a cute and wholesome poem and i love your puppy hugo...
three:
uhh i dont know what to say but this was a great poem and i hope to see more of hugo
-tea
Thank you! It's good that I'm typing this message about I have a sore throat lol
So cute!!