I like how you painted a picture with words. I could clearly see the statue in my head. I am impressed with your work. You also have a grand vocabulary. Keep up the great work. But I do feel you could a little more to it , i got the image but I didn't fully get the emotional impact i feel should go along with it. But nevertheless this is really good in my opinion.
happy writing
~ Rebels Scream Silently~
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