The Book Man, Chapter 41 (Revised)

by BluesClues

Published March 26, 2014

E - Everyone

In The Book Man

41 PLANTING ROSES

They stood together on the edge of the gardens for a moment, bent almost double as they tried to catch their breath. Scratches from the crows’ talons and beaks lined Liza and Mr. Catcher’s faces. Christian had no doubt that his face was scratched up as well, but there was no time to dwell on his pain. He didn’t know if it was the lights or the gardens themselves that had repelled the crows, but he felt he and his companions would be safer farther away from the Fairgrounds.

“Come on,” he said in a shaky voice.

“Give us a minute,” Liza said. She had straightened up, but her breathing still came in sharp gasps and her voice was trembling, too. Christian shook his head.

“We’ve got to get to the rose garden.”

“Just look at him, Christian.” Liza gestured at Mr. Catcher, who was yet bent double, wheezing. He tried to stand up straight, only to be attacked by another fit of coughing. When his companions rushed to help him, he waved them away and held up a finger. They waited.

“That,” he said finally, “is more running than I’ve done in an age.”

The maze was even more eerily still than the night before; the horse was not at its center. Christian panicked for a moment, wondering if it had been destroyed like its rider and the mermaid, but then he remembered leaving it by Minerva’s pedestal. Perhaps it had spent the night at her side. He drew comfort from the thought and led his companions through the maze easily.

“Christian,” Liza said, “what is going on?”

A lot, Christian thought. A lot was going on and he didn’t know where to begin explaining it. She hadn’t believed the truth even before things had gotten so out of hand.

“Christian,” she said a few minutes later, as they wound their way through the rose garden toward the courtyard. This time fright had edged its way into her voice. “Christian, is it always so dangerous? Conrad—”

“I’m certain your husband is fine, my dear,” Mr. Catcher said, patting her hand, but his voice quivered as well. “At this very moment he’s probably sitting at a fire with the Fair-folk, drinking and telling stories to pass the time until he can return. He’ll be back in no time.”

Christian’s pace quickened as he drew up to the trellis. The horse was indeed beside the pedestal, with its neck tucked over its back and its legs folded beneath it. Like Minerva, it was still in statue form, but when Christian dropped the handle of the wagon and put a hand on its side, the horse shuddered and turned into flesh and horsehair. Mr. Catcher laughed.

“Can it be Rath?” he said. “My, but I haven’t seen you in a long time.”

The horse whickered and pushed to its feet, plodding over to nose at the old man’s pockets.

“No, I’m afraid I haven’t anything for you today,” Mr. Catcher said. “Ah, me, it’s been so long. I used to sit in that maze and feed him carrots, you know. I’d got tired of the Fair by then.”

Christian barely paid attention to his words now that they had made it. He crouched beside the pedestal and put a hand on Minerva’s. The tatters of shirt he had used to bandage her arm were crusty with blood and looked oddly out of place wound as they were around a marble statue.

“Minerva?”

The color started in her hand, where he had touched her, and spread throughout her body until her soft belly rose and fell with breath and her dark eyes opened sleepily. A slow smile spread over her face at the sight of him.

“I brought you something,” Christian said. He pulled the pillows from the wagon. Her face whitened as he lifted her up to arrange them beneath her head, but when he laid her back down and covered her with the quilt she gave a kittenish sigh.

“And this,” he said, and he held up The Hobbit. The cover was lopsided from being upset on their flight across the clearing, but otherwise it looked whole and new again thanks to his repairs.

“Thank you,” she said. Her voice was frighteningly weak.

“Oh!” Liza cried. Christian whipped around, but it was just Aurelia blossoming from her rose petal.

“She needs new bandages, Book Man,” the fairy said. “Look.”

Gingerly, he peeled away the strips of shirt. Whatever Aurelia had done last night had stopped the bleeding, but dried blood still crusted about the end of Minerva’s stump.

The crows had shredded the paper bags in the wagon, but Christian dug through their remains until he found the roll of gauze and the washrag. He dipped his buckets in the mermaid’s pool. Then he looked at Liza, who hung back and stared wide-eyed at the golden figure of the fairy.

“Do you know how to wrap bandages?” Christian asked. She didn’t answer, did not even acknowledge that she’d heard him. “Liza. Liza.”

She shuddered but did not take her eyes off the fairy.

“Christian,” she whispered, “there is a little gold person standing on this trellis.”

“Yes, I know,” Christian said patiently. “That’s Aurelia. No, you’re not dreaming or crazy or anything—”for she had opened her mouth to speak, and based on her expression it was going to be a repeat of the things she’d said on Friday night. “Look, I know this is a lot to take in, but I could use your help right now.”

She blinked at Aurelia as the fairy gazed back at her.

“I don’t know how to wrap bandages,” she said at last.

“Neither do I, but I figured it out somehow. Please?”

Liza washed Minerva’s stump in silence, but she began to speak in a faltering voice as she unrolled a measure of gauze. At least the stunned look had left her face, Christian thought. She just needed something to do, something to distract her from the fact that a little gold person had materialized out of a rose plant to say they needed to change the bandages of a woman who had been a marble statue the minute before.

Christian watched for a moment and then turned to Mr. Catcher and said, “Could you help me set up the tent?”

The two men lifted the box out of the wagon and carried it off to the side of the pedestal. By the time Liza was done changing Minerva’s bandages, however, they had only managed to get one side set up. When they tried to raise the other, the first end collapsed. Christian cursed under his breath.

Liza held Minerva’s hand until she fell back asleep and then came over to watch the two men work.

“So,” she said after a minute, “so she’s got a day job as a statue.”

“Yes,” said Christian. “Her name is Minerva and she waters the roses.”

“Of course she does.” Liza watched as they managed to erect this side of the tent, only to have the other side fall down again. “Would you like some help?”

“Why, do you know how to put up a tent?”

She rummaged through the box the tent had come in and held up a sheet of paper. “No, but I know how to read directions.”

Her voice had calmed considerably; she seemed glad to be doing something as normal as setting up a tent. With her help, they had the tent up in less than five minutes.

“Thank you,” said Christian. He wheeled the wagon over to where the old roses looked worst, took out the new rose plants, and set them on the path beside him. Aurelia flitted over from Minerva’s pedestal and landed in the wagon.

“What are you going to do with those?” she asked.

“Watch and see,” said Christian.

He had forgotten to pack a spade or gardening gloves, so he dug through the ash and dirt with his hands. He pulled up the old rose bushes, which looked black and dead; only the smallest, dried-out nubbins remained of them, poking bleakly out of the soil. Aurelia sighed at the sight but said nothing. The garden gnome waddled across the piles of books in the wagon to hug her.

Christian placed the dead roses in a pile beside him, feeling guilty that he was not providing them with something more fitting, maybe a burial. But then he unearthed one which had a dim blue light glowing at the tip of its root.

Help me! a raspy little voice like Aurelia’s own cried. Let me out!

Aurelia’s golden hue brightened. She flew into the air, crying, “Oh, sister! One of my sisters lives!”

She darted beside him and put a hand on the root. There was a flash of blinding blue-white light, and then a figure even tinier than Aurelia blossomed out of the dead rose plant. This one was brilliant blue, like blue flame. Aurelia embraced her, weeping golden tears.

“There’s another one,” Liza said faintly.

“Thousands, actually,” Christian told her.

“Thousands,” Liza said. “Oh.”

When Aurelia stopped crying, she wiped her eyes and asked, “Did none of the others survive?”

“No,” the blue figure said somberly. “I was littlest, so I hid. All the way down in the root by myself. It was so dark, but I was safe. But the rest of the plant burned and our sisters—”

She stopped speaking abruptly, but Aurelia hugged her again and said, “I’m so glad to see you safe. Book Man,” she said, looking up at him, “this is the youngest of my sisters, Carina.”

“Pleased to meet you,” Christian said.

Aurelia attracted her sister’s attention again, so he turned aside to plant the new rose bushes he had brought with him. When he had finished, Aurelia and Carina turned to the closest of the old rose plants, which were still alive but looked almost as sickly as the ones Christian had just pulled up. The two fairies touched their hands to the bushes.

For a moment nothing happened. Then lights winked into existence all along the plants, gold, blue, green, pink, white, looking like nothing so much as Christmas lights strung up in the rose bushes. Just lights, nothing more. They drifted over the rose bed, sank into the new rose plants, and disappeared. The new bushes shuddered, grew a little taller and fuller, and were still again.

Aurelia put a hand on them.

“Now they will live,” she said in satisfaction.

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Valkyria
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Valkyria wrote a review Review · Sep 24, 2020

Hello BluesClues,

Chapter 41! A million more to go! I cannot get enough of this story! Seriously, how has this not been made into a movie? The scenes will look gorgeous on them!

So, we've got more insight into the characters. Mr. Catcher knows about Celadon Park's magic. He knows Rath. Liza gets her character development.

You know, I just thought: The Hobbit is Christain's favorite book. His journey seems similar to Bilbo's. Was this something you thought a lot about? Because that is very clever.

I do have one nitpick:

“Yes, I know,” Christian said patiently. “That’s Aurelia. No, you’re not dreaming or crazy or anything—”for she had opened her mouth to speak, and based on her expression it was going to be a repeat of the things she’d said on Friday night. “Look, I know this is a lot to take in, but I could use your help right now.”


I don't think that part was necessary. It feels clunky and it doesn't add much to the paragraph as a whole.

The descriptions are vivid, and the characters feel real. You can be sure I'm going to finish until the end!

Thank you so much! I'm querying a different story to agents right now and feeling kinda low about my writing, so seeing you shower this older story with love is so lovely and helps me out so much ::sobbing emoji::

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TimmyJake wrote a review Review · Jul 30, 2014

Timmy here!

I really don't know what to say. I can comment on this chapter, and mark it as a review cuz that is what the kewl people do--leave reviews, not comments or I can make this short and sweet. I choose the first, because I am kewl. 8)

“That,” he said finally, “is more running than I’ve done in an age.”


I totally loved this part, and its so Mr.-Catcher-because-he-is-insane kind of dialogue. But I think he would have said something more exact, because its more him. Kind of like: "... is more running that I've done since the day I ran the... or ran [I]after the... [insert funny memory here]" or something similarly silly. It seems like something he would say. :)

Liza's journey into this... this strange new world is so much fun to watch. Christian seemed t have a little bit less of a jolt when he came in. I mean, sure, he was very surprised at the hell-hound and the fair and whatnot, but Liza has spent her life in a cubicle, reading pieces of official papers. Christian has spent his life in books. There is less time for imagination when your are centered on your career and not much past. Its tons of fun watching her learn everything about this new place, and become used to the little oddities of it. Her calm way of telling Christian that there was a little gold person on the trellis was so funny, and it was because she was so quiet about it, but I could hear the freakedoutedness in her voice. (that is sooo a word)

One thing I have noticed while reading this story that I think needs constant clarification: Their ages don't make much sense to me. Nope. I have always envisioned Christian as a younger man--in his late twenties. Definitely no grey hairs. Minerva gave me the impression of a woman about 23-25 years of age. While she acts much older and more... mature? I was given the image of a young woman. Very young. If this is not the image you want to give your readers, because you have stated several times that he is thirty-seven, then I would suggest tweaking with descriptions in places to fix that visual. Otherwise, I would think you need to change his age or something... The way I visualize him now makes him mucho younger than what I have seen of the ages you give him--especially with his conversations with Conrad. I dunno. He just doesn't seem like a guy in his late thirties, and he especially doesn't seem like he is approaching middle-age. Whatcha think? I am anxious to hear what you think about this.

I loved the part where Christian is doing rose planting and re-planting and the fairies doing their work on the plants. There is something magical about this place, Blue, and it's not magic in the literal sense, but more like an air to the place--one you give to it. The park has such a special aura to it that once you are inside, like meee, you never want to leave. This place is simply special

Onto the next chapter! So sorry for missing a day...
~Darth Timmyjake

Keep in mind that although Minerva looks quite young, she's actually a garden statue who was made right after the initial war with Goblin, more than 150 years ago. Plus she hasn't socialized as much as a normal person.

I have another round of revisions planned already (getting ahead of myself here), so I'll work on bringing Christian's character a little more up-to-age. I mean, he's extremely shy and bookish and he's spent a long time living alone, so he's not going to be as confident or mellow or...whatever...as you'd expect a man of his age to be, plus of course it depends on the individual person, but especially with certain changes I've made to his history I need to make him seem *a little* more his age.

I'm so glad you like Liza's development so far. It was so hard to write her.

Yay! :D
I love the dedication you put towards your novel. :)

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Messenger
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Messenger wrote a review Review · Apr 27, 2014

Messenger back for more like an obedient servant (which I'm not. I'm the messenger god Hermes, so you can just kneel down and serve me :) )

*Clears throat* So, I really enjoyed these chapters. We get to see a lot more of Morrow. (Poor guy) I love all your tales you have. So exciting and cool. It makes it feel kind of fantasyish. And keeping the chapters named the same like that is cool too. And speaking of chapter titles, chapter 66 made me laugh so hard. I just couldn't stop smiling. It's just . . . . hahahahahaha funny

It was also nice to learn more about the geography of the land. We see now more how everything is set up. However, the swamp part with Christian seeing the hand was just . . . cheesy? In all that swamp, he just so happens to be in that very part? I mean come on, I know it adds for effect but still . . . unrealistic in my book. Or review. Or whatever you call it!!!

I really want to go beat up all these lazy bums who are so . . .grr what's the word? They are so stupid! Morrow was giving a boss-speech and they just ridicule him. Let's go Christian . . . or not.

Deanie made a funny point about poor Conrad. He just is gonna wake up in the middle of the camp being asked to give a speech. hehehe this should be good!

~Messenger

Morrow is my precious baby <333 So I'm glad you're enjoying him.

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Deanie
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Deanie wrote a review Review · Apr 12, 2014

Another review just for you Blue!

Awh this was such a sweet chapter. Both Morrow and Christian trying to rally the fair-folk. And sheesh, those people are so hopeless! Yes, they're fighting for survival, but really, don't they want their old life back. One fight, so that they don't have to fight for anything anymore? Agh - at least Ronin and his troupe are ever kind :)

Isn't someone - anyone, going to tell Conrad that he is being dragged back to the park? It was nice of Christian to take him but yeah, it's always nice to be notified. Also, when will we find out how the portal got intercepted last time? Wouldn't Christian think about it a bit before he goes running through another portal, out of cautiousness or something?

Morrow's tale was an interesting one... but I got a bit confused. So Christian said he thinks he knows who the person at the bottom of the lake was. But when Morrow is telling the story I got the impression that he was walking around an earthly mountain looking for Morrow, and there was a portal on one side so he took it through to Neva's place. When Christian is travelling to Neva no mountain is mentioned at all. So it might be a nice little detail to chip in there to make all this round up. Also, make sure you mention he has gone to another world as well, to clear things up a bit in my befuzzled mind :D Oh, and one more thing! Maybe Naro could confirm a bit that Morrow was the one in the lake, seeing as she is always hovering around. It would just makes things more obvious so we don't feel the need to guess that it might've been Morrow or not.

I like Morrow even though he drowns out his problems by drinking. He seems like a determined type although when there isn't anything much worth fighting for he kind of lets himself on the lose a bit.

Anyways, another nice chapter. Reading on, as always :)

Deanie x

Morrow is my precious baby <3

Also, Neva lives in the mountains. From the side Christian and Naro came from, it's fairly easy going, but from the other side (the side Morrow's dad came from) it's hard to find if you don't know where you're going. So Morrow's dad went around the mountains, ended up in Narodnaya's lands, and went up to Neva's palace the same way Naro and Christian did, if that makes sense. I have a map. A very small one.

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Rydia
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Rydia wrote a review Review · Mar 30, 2014

This may be the last one in the Green Room which means I'll have to reach a decision on whether to stay or sleep after this. Oooh mystery!

Specifics

1. Wait, he was made mortal again and didn't instantly die? I'd have thought that would be the result of it since he's so old?

Overall

Uh, right... not much on the specifics end of things! I liked Christian's speech but I can't say I blame the fair people for now being roused. I liked Morrow's better in fact, and I love the response he got xD Poor guy! I'm actually hoping the fair people don't make a sudden turn around in the next chapter. I feel they need more than just words to stir them to action. They need to feel like they have a chance to win and I can't see that at the moment.

Your descriptions are nice as ever and the plot is moving along at a good pace. I perhaps would have liked a few more words with Conrad while the horse was being hitched up, or would have expected Christian to go and check on him at least, but other than that I didn't feel like anything was missing from this chapter and I'm glad that Naya managed to get a few words in. I want to see how Ronin's troops react to her when she shows herself, but alas it will be time for me to go back to my very busy life tomorrow so I may not get to.

I have really enjoyed reading this though. Perhaps I will go back to the beginning and slowly plod through the other parts. That's about as big a compliment as I can give you for the moment xD

Heather xx

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Iggy
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Iggy wrote a review Review · Mar 26, 2014

Blue <3

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A nitpick I found...

a wood-elf he met walking under starlight in the Sunforest.They fell in love and were wedded in the clearing,


A space is needed between those two sentences![/quote]


Those rotten Fair Folk! *shakes fist*

Like seriously, aren't they going to fight for their land? The Fair belongs to them. Forget Goblin! That git will pay for what he's done, and who better to do it than the people he's terrorized and ruined? They better come to their senses and to Christian's aid or I will hurt you. >:(

I'm gonna bet that Morrow and Ronin are the gay couple.. ja?!

But seriously, I'm loving this so far. Narodnaya is growing on me <3 even if she did kill Morrow the Elder x) she seems to have taken a liking to Christian and I hope she helps him with his quest.

Now where will they go? Back to earth? Well, at least Conrad will be reunited with Liza <3 Here's to hoping the fairies can save him :'( because if he dies, who will be the guardian of the Fair?! Unless.. *eyes Christian*

I see what you're up to, missy.

Oh, DO you now? <3 Anywho, guess what guess what guess what? I took a look and you will definitely realize exactly who the queer pairing is in the next post. HOORAY.

Iggy replied · Mar 26, 2014

YES.



By swallowing evil words unsaid, no one has ever harmed his stomach.
— Winston Churchill