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The Book Man, Chapters 35-36 (Revised)

35 WATERING THE ROSES

After a while, she fell asleep. At least, Christian hoped she was asleep. Perhaps she had passed out from blood loss, but he had no idea how to tell. Why did he have to be so helpless in emergencies? If only he knew something useful and not just the things he had read. Or if he could at least be calm and collected like those people who were good in emergencies, his mother, for example. But no, he had to take after his father and become a piddling mess in crises.

He laid Minerva on her pedestal to rest, deciding she was, in fact, sleeping. She could use a good rest after the trauma she’d faced. He remembered from his mother’s cancer treatments the doctors had always been telling her to get plenty of rest, even early on.

He was still shaky and cold; he felt like he couldn’t breathe deeply enough to fill his lungs. He stood up while Minerva slept and made his way toward the rose beds. The horse tried to follow him, but he said, “No. Stay here.”

It whickered as if it understood and folded its legs beneath it to lie beside the pedestal.

Christian stopped before the trellis and rubbed his temples with his fists. The Fair gone, Minerva horribly wounded, the roses and all the books burnt up.

No—not all. One rosebud on the trellis peeled back slowly, just a little bit, enough for him to see a book hidden beneath it. He reached in and plucked it out. The Hobbit, the copy he had given Minerva, in dire need of repair but more or less in one piece. He thumbed through it and slipped it into his pocket. He would repair it later, maybe. He looked around at the roses in despair. One book and several dozen dried out, crackling plants. That was all that was left.

A raspy voice emerged from the rosebud.

Water!

Christian blinked. By the pedestal he saw the horse’s ears swivel in the direction of the roses.

Water! the voice cried again in a hoarse whisper. Other voices rose up to join it, hundreds of raspy whispers just like the first, all crying the same thing. Water!

Could it be? Christian thought. Could it be that some of the roses, burnt and blackened though they appeared, were still alive?

Water! the voices cried. Water!

But how was he to give them water? Minerva’s pitcher lay shattered in a dozen pieces around her pedestal. Then he remembered his buckets. He would have to run all the way home and back to get them—No! He had never brought them home the night he had watered the roses, the night the harpies attacked.

He found the two buckets pushed far beneath the bench, right up against Minerva’s pedestal. Her brow wrinkled in pain as she slept, and she whimpered. Christian put a hand against her forehead. She calmed and shifted into a more comfortable position. Pillows, Christian thought. She needed some pillows. And maybe a blanket as well, although in the ungodly heat it was difficult to imagine anyone needing a blanket ever again.

He dipped the buckets into the mermaid’s pool and drenched the rose bushes in water. It took him hours by himself, having to return to the pool every few minutes to refill the buckets, to lug the buckets farther and farther from the courtyard to reach all the roses. By the time he was done, sweat poured from his face and soaked his undershirt, and his back ached, but the salvageable rose plants had been watered. Christian even thought some of their leaves looked a little greener and the nubbins a little taller.

“There,” he said, pushing his glasses up his sweat-slicked nose. “That’s better.”

After a moment, a slender golden figure blossomed out of the rosebud that had first spoken, her thin face haggard.

“Thank you,” she said. “We were terribly thirsty.”

“Aurelia!” Christian said.

She nodded tiredly. “Forgive my sisters, Book Man. They would thank you themselves, but they are too tired to materialize even partially.”

“What happened?” Christian asked.

“An army of Goblin’s allies. Hellhounds, nightmares, banshees, imps…all manner of horrid beasts. I do not think they came for the purpose of launching an attack: if they had, much more would have been destroyed. We were able to open the portal to let the Fair-folk escape, but by doing so we left ourselves defenseless.”

“Why did the army come, if not to attack?”

“To join Goblin. The spell is waning. For the first time in more than one hundred and fifty years they are able to enter the park grounds. Now Goblin can amass his forces, and in the meantime they have weakened my sisters and me and chased away all others who would oppose them and their master.”

That didn’t sound good, but Christian had other matters on his mind.

“Aurelia, can you do anything for Minerva? I mean—” Her large golden eyes looked at him uncomprehendingly—“Water Girl?”

“What has happened to her?”

Christian pointed, unwilling to look. “She’s—she’s lost an arm. Can you do anything for her?”

“Show me,” Aurelia said.

He picked her up and carried her over to where Minerva lay sleeping. The horse snorted in its sleep as he approached. He was not comforted to see the grim look on Aurelia’s face as she hopped down from his palm and examined Minerva’s stump.

“Was it you who bandaged her arm?” she asked.

“It’s my best shirt,” Christian said. He was arrested by the sight of Minerva’s face, white with an unhealthy pallor instead of her usual fairness, and the wrinkle in her brow. Aurelia looked up at him with understanding.

“You did well,” she said. “She would have bled out if you had not, and then there would be nothing I could do. As it is I cannot do as much as I think you would like. I am weak.”

“So—so you can’t do anything for her?”

“I can do a little.” Aurelia laid her hands on Minerva’s stump and spoke in a language which made her voice sound more than ever like wind in the branches. Golden light glowed all around her and Minerva’s arm, so bright Christian had to look away. When it faded, Aurelia said, “I have stemmed the tide of her blood and soothed her mind. That is all I can do, but it may be enough.”

“Thank you,” Christian said. He simply had to believe her when she said the bleeding had stopped. The tatters of his shirt were soaked through with blood. A little color had returned to Minerva’s face, however, and her breathing sounded easier.

“You may stay with her, if you like,” Aurelia said. “I must see to my sisters. If you don’t mind I would like to borrow your horse. I am too tired to get to all of them on my own.”

“Sure,” Christian said, “but he isn’t my horse. I think he’s Morrow’s.”

“Ah,” Aurelia said. “Rath.”

She leapt down from the pedestal, landing on the horse’s withers. Its skin shuddered at her weight as though she were no more than a fly; it did not wake up.

“Rath,” Aurelia said. One of the horse’s ears swiveled in her direction. She spoke louder, more commanding. “Rath!”

The horse awoke, snorting and blinking as it reeled to its feet. Aurelia patted its neck.

“Rath?” Christian asked.

“That is his name,” Aurelia said. She clucked to the horse, and it plodded off to the farther rose beds with her on its back, the world’s tiniest rider.

36 LEAVING

Aurelia and the horse were back in the courtyard and the east was lit with the greyish light preceding dawn when Christian said, rather reluctantly, “I have to go.”

He would have preferred not to leave Minerva’s side, not even if it meant spending the day in a deserted park sitting beside a damaged marble statue, but he needed provisions if he was going to stay. Food, shelter, extra clothing. And books, of course.

“You mean to leave?” Aurelia asked. “Oh, but—”

Then she stopped.

“What?” Christian said.

“You will return, will you not?”

“Yes,” Christian said, “tonight. But—”turning to look at Minerva with worry in his eyes—“you’ll be alright until I get back?”

Minerva smiled faintly. “Certainly. It’ll be no time at all. I shall close my eyes and when I awake you’ll be here again.”

“She will be well looked after,” Aurelia said. “If Goblin’s army returns and destroys her, it will only be because it first destroyed us.”

That was not at all reassuring. Christian would prefer it if Goblin and his army did not destroy any of them. He almost stayed at the thought, though he was not sure he could do any better of a job protecting Minerva than Aurelia and her sisters could, but his stomach was painfully aware of the fact he had not eaten since tea time yesterday. He had to go home and prepare himself.

His anxiety was plain on his face, written in the crease of his brow and the pallor of his complexion. But it was with resolve in his voice that he said to Minerva, “I’ll come back tonight. I promise.”

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TimmyJake
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Timmy here!

Bleh. That entrance salutation is probably becoming quite... dull. I SHOULD LOOK FOR ALTERNATIVE METHODS OF INTRODUCTIONS! Yussss.... *coughs* Or not...
Onto the review!

She could use a good rest after the trauma she’d faced.


Not only Trauma, but also the fact that she is missing a limb. Hear me, Christian? MINERVA HAS NO ARM.

Okay, here is one concern I had--and its not really a concern, but more like a comment. So far you have made it seem like the arm is an irrelevant problem. Minerva is hurt, and so Christian is sad. Right. Sounds like Christian. But what does he feel when he looks down at the place where her arm should be? I am not talking about sickness from the blood (had that. gone there. Bleh. I get sick from paper-cuts) but more like a sickness of his heart. He seems to feel sadness that she feels pain, but I didn't see very many mentions of him feeling something about the loss of her arm. Like, he doesn't really glance up at the arm very often, or think about what life will be with her only having one arm. Its just, she needs rest, almost like she merely had surgery--not a traumatic experience in which she will never fully recover from. You can never fully recover from missing an arm. Ever.

By the time he was done, sweat poured from his face and soaked his undershirt


Wait! I don't remember you ever taking time to mention the weather very much before, if not at all... It seems rather strange for it to be extremely hot at night, as well. Even when its one hundred degrees here where I live, it still dies down to a manageable temperature at night--close to 60 or so, perhaps even lower. Is there something funny with the weather in this magical world, or? I felt a little lost there.

And books, of course.


Of course, Christian. ;) He is adorable... for a guy

Minerva smiled faintly. “Certainly. It’ll be no time at all. I shall close my eyes and when I awake you’ll be here again.”


Erm, wasn't she sleeping? Passed out? Fainted? Lights out? Not in this world? Erm, yeah. I thought she was snoozing away, leaving Christian to deal with all the stuff, while she healed (somewhat), and suddenly she is awake? I think you need a place where she wakes up. A transition period. :)

Another amaaaazing chapter, Blue! I cannot say perfection enough to emphasize my point.
~Darth Timmyjake

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Deanie
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Blueeeee

No review for you, hehe. This was too good and too hard to find faults in.

Neva seems a bit... dramatic? Like he enjoys the attention and the drama, and relishing In his ability to do what he wants. This whole goblin thing could've easily be avoided if he had just locked Goblin up himself. And the fairies would be in their home and SO much drama avoided >.> Ugh he is such a diva. I love it :P And really? I know killing someone is terrible but a life sentence for what may have been an accident is definitely questionable. I am so glad Christian seems to be able to see it. Also, maybe Goblin wouldn't have turned out so messed up if he hadn't been bullied and the locked away?

You must've written this really well because suddenly I am seriously peeved at Neva and don't think Goblin is too bad of a guy at all. His life has just been seriously messed up by his annoying brother...

... I'm ranting. Time to stop.

Oh I also wanted to mention how I love the fact that the book man gets to hear all these stories of the world and people's past gradually... lots of little stories in one big book! Nice <3

Kilts = Scottish = Scottish elves

Don't you love finding connections between peoples stories?

I am fangirling through this so I'll leave it as a comment. I apologise :)

Deanie x

<3

Yes, Neva is a diva. Or maybe not exactly a diva, but definitely he thinks he's the best thing since sliced bread and he thinks he can do no wrong...and you are not alone in feeling bad for Goblin. Which is good, because I wanted him to be kind of grey in terms of "he's a bad guy and they're trying to stop him, but also I sympathize with him, but also he's killed people..." So I'm glad I managed to do that right.

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Messenger
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Messenger is back again today for more. At least these two chapters for now, but probably several more before the day is over.

Well so much for a cool angel. Neva obviously has anger management problems as well as very little brotherly love. I was hoping he would be nice, but after reading this and the comments I realized he is . . . . not so nice.

Can't say much else about the first of these two chapters, but the second one was just like a re-run of what we've already been told, only adding the bits and pieces that concern Neva. And to be honest I don't like it. I felt like I could just skip this chapter it was that much of a re-run. Either just sum the story up with Neva's points included, or don't tell it at all and just make Neva kind of more hidden. But the way you have it now is useless. It's unnecessary. That's all I have to say on this chapter.

P.S. You don't have to figure out an exciting way to announce your entrance every time because it's exciting to be getting more reviews. :P

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lace182
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lace182 wrote a review · Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:49 pm

This is the third part of your book that I will review. It's kind of interesting reading it like this. It's like all the patches of a quilt piled and I have no idea what will become of it. I considered reading from the beginning but this is too interesting this way.

I have now met Conrad, the balloon guy I believe, I have seen a fairy park, seen statues come to life, saw some humans can use magic, and now we are apparently on another world where humans are a sub-species.

I have to rant. I think the weakling human type is so overdone. I'm not saying your story should be edited but I want to ask - isn't it about time humans were the big brother in the universe? Why must we always be a sub-species or have one super human being in our midst. Ok, I guess it isn't always that way but so often it is. Someone has to be first. Someone has to learn how to survive the technology and emotional maelstroms of their race. Why not us?

Well, enough of that rant.

I wonder if you have read any of the folk lore concerning fairies, gnomes, ect. There is a lot of information on the web. You are creating fantastic creatures, a white king with indigo hair, I like that. I wonder if you have tried to deviate from the typical fairy or gnome or if you are making up your own creatures without reference to the old tales.

My one caution, try to write while in the mind of a creature when you have a creature speak. In the following you have a the kingly Neva apologize and then speak of chairs. I doubt such a strong willed and arrogant being would apologize and why do so for chairs that do not exist especially when speaking to someone he considers a sub-species?

“I’m afraid there are few chairs in my house, but I assure you the grass is quite as comfortable.”


Also, Christian is warned to be careful. He should not anger Neva but then he does anyways. I should expect a much stronger reaction from Neva, either one of complete forgiveness 'you know not what you say' sort of forgiveness, or banishment for which Christian would have to beg forgiveness or something like that. I wouldn't expect Neva to shrug off the insolence.

I love your story and your ideas. Thank you for the submission.

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Iggy
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Iggy wrote a review · Tue Mar 25, 2014 12:52 am

*squints*

So.. twins, eh? Clearly fraternal. *cackles*

Anyways, I'm getting the feels for Goblin. D: No one should be treated with such cruelty, especially since he's a prince! I'm sure he's not /that/ ugly.. but yet, you're gonna prove me wrong, aren't you? Anyways x2, I really was starting to tear up and develop the feels for Goblin, and then I remembered that it's his fault that Minerva is missing an arm. That bad curse word! No pity for him, oh heck no.

Neva is, as you said, a douche, but what more would I have expected? He acts as an "angel" would; arrogant and narcissistic and holding himself in such a golden light. Bleh. I actually assumed the fruit was poisonous due to his pompous attitude and screamed at Christian for eating it. Dx whether it is or not, I don't know.. DON'T KILL MY BABY.

So yes, getting better and better. Although I keep forgetting: Is Morrow a human or no? Because he's in the Otherworld, but then again, Neva did say he rewarded them.. was this the reward? *confused*

Off to read more~

btw I was one point away from getting 150 points for this... YOU OWE ME A POINT.

Hahaha. Then a point you shall have.

Anyway, Morrow *is* a human. A gypsy. Or, well, a Scottish Traveler, which is not quite the same thing. Morrow asked Neva for immortality, but an immortal person would stand out on earth, right? Plus his people sleep in the Sunforest every time they leave earth, so why not go with them?



The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.
— Mark Twain