47 NUTS AND BERRIES
Narodnaya’s voice followed him for a long while after she vanished behind him, ringing in his head even as the mountain range and the forest before it grew large in his sight. By the time he reached the edge of the forest, the sun was setting and he was chilly from spending the day in damp clothes. At least his pounding heart had slowed, and he would not have to spend another night sleeping on the bog.
He nestled against the base of an oak tree right on the edge of the forest. The bark was rough, but the trunk was curved inwards in a way that fitted his body perfectly, and the grass beneath him was soft and (more importantly) dry. He still wanted a fire, but this would do for now.
Christian watched the sun sink lower on the horizon until his stomach rumbled; he had eaten nothing since Mr. Catcher’s stewish concoction. His jaunt in the Otherworld would be much longer than he had planned for, but he had no food and no inkling of when he would come across people.
He stood up and stretched; faint evening sunlight slanted through the woodland. Perhaps he could find some nuts and berries to eat for his dinner. With that thought in mind, he headed into the trees.
The forest was old growth, full of knotty trees so tall and spreading there was hardly any undergrowth. The light shone dim through the pillars of the trunks. Christian kept in sight of his oak tree; he did not see a path marked. Eventually he would have to go through the forest anyway, but for now he preferred not to get lost.
Christian knew where in the woods to find edible plants thanks to his collection of field guides, but it was difficult to identify the plants he found by the lessening light of the sunset, especially without a book in hand to direct him. These ones, growing right on the edge of the bog, might have been wild carrots, but they might also have been poison hemlock, and in the dim light he could not tell which. He sighed and continued looking.
After a while he had a good collection of blueberries, blackberries, elderberries, and walnuts. He ate slowly in the hopes another magical creature would appear out of nowhere and help him somehow, although he would prefer if the next magical creature was not so frightening as Narodnaya.
No magical creature, however, frightening or otherwise, appeared to him. Large black squirrels scampered overhead and peered down at him, taking the walnuts he offered (he couldn’t open them). Birds sang in the distance, a final chorus before they bedded down for the night. For a while he tried to identify the birds by call, when he could hear them over the squirrels’ quarreling, but he had never been able to figure out how bird calls were supposed to sound from the way they were spelled out in his field guides. Even so, it was nice to sit beneath the oak tree, listening to the birds as the squirrels fought over the walnuts.
Had his heart not palpitated now and then in anxiety over Liza, he would’ve had a pleasant time of things. He comforted himself with the thought that she might have come out in the Sunforest as they had meant to and found her husband already—perhaps she and Conrad had returned to the park by now. Wherever they were, he hoped they were as safe and comfortable as he was at present.
Exhausted by his adventures, he fell asleep quickly, but he shivered awake sometime just after dawn. His clothes had never fully dried out and now the early-morning breeze moved through them and chilled him. His limbs felt even stiffer than the night before. He arose with a cracking in his spine and arms, stretched, and wandered into the woods for his breakfast. As daylight grew, he found edible berries more easily than he had the night before and took pleasure in the way walking through the trees provided his legs with relief from their stiffness. He was still cold, but he thought if he walked long enough he might warm up; so after his breakfast, he headed on his way.
After only a few minutes of walking, however, he found himself by the oak tree again. Well, he thought, at least he hadn’t gotten lost. He turned and went back into the forest. But within half an hour he was back at its edge.
The third time, Christian thought he was making real progress. He was still in the forest after an hour, two hours, three hours. But toward the end of the fourth hour, he saw (with a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach) an elder tree he thought was the one he’d raided for his breakfast. Sure enough, five minutes later he found himself back where he’d started.
He sat beneath his oak tree, defeated. The squirrels descended upon him, sniffing for food. Slight comfort he had not become more lost in his wanderings, when his second day in the Otherworld was nearly half over and he was no closer to finding Liza, her husband, or Morrow—no closer, in fact, to putting Narodnaya’s cheerless lands behind him.
His stomach rumbled. He stood up and dusted himself off. At least he knew he could find more berries for his dinner, although he would have preferred something more substantial. Some kidneys, maybe, or perhaps salmon poached in a lemon-butter sauce.
The thought of fish made him realize how thirsty he was. The only water nearby was that of the bog, but he wasn’t sure bog water was safe to drink. When he remembered the hand he’d seen beneath the sphagnum, he felt so queasy that he thought he might never be thirsty again.
The chattering and calls of the squirrels and birds rose to a crescendo at sunset and then died away. Christian was still picking berries as darkness fell. He was hungry, and between him and the animals most of the low-hanging branches near his oak tree had been stripped of their fruits. He ate as he picked, but when he headed back to the tree his hands were still full of berries—until his foot caught on a fallen branch and sent him sprawling into the dirt. Berries flew from his hands and rolled away as he landed on his stomach. Something hard rolled out of a trouser pocket and collided with his knee.
“Ouch,” he said. He sat up, rubbing his knee, and felt around for the thing that had hurt it. His hand closed on something hard and misshapen. It was bumpy at one end and all through the middle, pointy at the other end. He had a feeling he knew what it was, but he brought it back to the oak tree to examine it.
One of the garden gnomes had climbed into his pocket again and was frozen in statue form in his hand.
“If only you were alive,” Christian said to it. “I’d be glad of some company.”
A familiar (and rather unwelcome) female voice sounded in his head.
Then ask for it.
48 NARODNAYA
Christian leapt to his feet, banging his head on a low-hanging branch. His eyes watered.
“Ouch,” he said again. “What are you doing here?”
Narodnaya floated before him, glowing faintly green in the darkness. Her eyes shone so bright they dimmed the stars overhead.
Escorting you out of my lands. Though you seem to be having so much trouble leaving that I wonder if I should not escort you farther.
“No, thank you, that won’t be necessary,” Christian said hastily. “I’ll be leaving in the morning.”
I thought you were leaving this morning.
Christian blushed to think she had seen him going in circles. Perhaps he should ask her for help after all, but he was embarrassed by his own ineptitude.
“I changed my mind,” he mumbled.
You got lost three times.
Christian blushed harder, but he sat back down, folded his arms, and said, “Tomorrow I’m really leaving. Now, if you don’t mind—” Narodnaya arched her eyebrows at him and he sputtered, “That is to say, if you’ll forgive me, I am incredibly tired.”
Of course.
He felt her watching him as he leaned back against the trunk of the oak tree with his eyes closed. He hoped she would not stay long; then he remembered not to hope that, because she would hear it and might be offended. Her presence made him uneasy until he heard the shuffling and scurrying of nighttime creatures. All around him they prowled, but none came too close. If they did, Narodnaya hissed at them like a demented cat, sending them scampering back into the trees.
Eventually he fell asleep, but he woke up near dawn with a parched throat and a tongue heavy from dehydration. He couldn’t see Narodnaya and thought she might have returned to her bog. Then her voice came from the darkness behind him.
Would you like a drink?
His tongue got in the way when he tried to speak. He thought yes as hard as he could.
Narodnaya sounded amused. There’s no need to shout at me. You’ll make your head explode, thinking that hard.
She drifted in front of him. Cupped in her hands was a massive mushroom cap, overturned and brimming with water. Christian took it and drank eagerly, though he shuddered when their fingers touched. Narodnaya’s skin was as clammy as a dead man’s.
She drew away and gazed at him coldly.
“Thank you,” he stammered.
She pointed off to the northwest and said, There’s a stream that way. If you find it, you can follow it all the way through the forest.
Without so much as saying goodbye, she vanished.
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Timmy here!
Been there, done that. Being tall, I constantly bang my head on stuff all around. And it doesn't seem to matter if its high or low--my head is there in the way. So very realistic there!This will be the shortest review I have given you on Book Man, because I really don't know what to talk about, besides do a few praising paragraphs, and leave you with compliments.
First of all,
His search for berries and stuff to eat was very realistic and very Christian-like. It would make sense that he knew a lot of stuff about that, because of his obvious interest in books and such, and since he is Christian (well, obviously) he would be extra careful about that kind of stuff and not take any chances with grabbing poison veggies and such. A lot of other people would have just grabbed and started nomming (I might) but he was careful--and just totally Christian-like. Very in character, there.
I totally get the reason why you like this marsh witch. Narodnaya is a very cool, very vicious (at times) character, and she really knows her forest. And she is really protective of her home, which I can see why. Stupid humans. we have a bad reputation, it seems. I hope you have shortened version of her name, though, because it can get long and very hard to rememberrr... I mean, its awesome and I lurv it and its so fantasyish and everything, but it doesn't roll very smoothly off the tongue, and I had to copy and paste the first time. I hope she has a nickname I can remember. Naya! Yusssss... I now remember.
She isn't rude, but she isn't cordial either... Hmmm... she is a difficult character to pinpoint. I like her!
~Darth Timmyjake
Some people call her Naya and some people call her Naro, so whichever you prefer
So I'm back, and ready to read!! Oh and criticize you to death hehehehe
Attack with rage, destroy Goblin! Pick up the crown! (singing in the "Let It Go" tune)
I think you should switch that comma to a period. It would flow better.
Wait . . . . did I see the word "kissing" as I was scrolling through this? >.>
Hee hee hee, oh my I love this guy, er, spider. He's like an adorable cartoon sidekick.
You just used the phrase "eight-legged dog" a few paragraphs ago. It feels kind of . . boring to read the same phrase again.
So Tirion and Morrow . . .. didn't see that coming. But we ca kind of glance over that for now.
Now as for Christian and Minerva? I truly mean awwwwwww!!!! That was beautiful and so romantic. xDDD See, I can enjoy romance
But . . . TO BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Messenger
TIRION AND MORROW FOREVER <333333333
Blue!

How dare this only have one review? I better solve it, quick!
When I read the title of chapter 77 I was like FINALLY WHO WHAT WHERE WHEN
Yay Minerva and Christian! They were so sweet and shy and aaah <3 Also, I didn't know Tirion and Morrow were going to be a thing! Were a thing! At least we get to know a bit more about strict old Tirion now... it must've been a really difficult decision to make, and I think it could've been stressed a little bit. But I liked how you told this little piece of information...
When Christian is pondering the idea of death because of what Naro said... I thought he could've been a bit more emotional. I don't know, he made it seem so blasé. Oh I might die - let's move on. I have to fight but I'm terribly injured and can barely walk - let's move on. For someone who never has fought a battle I think he's taking it too easy for my liking. Now would be a good point to mention books again in my opinion... like maybe wondering if the battle will be like that in Percy Jackson or Eragon or something like that. To be more bookmanish...
Liza's like the mother to them all. I love her character <3 Also, the mention of Grandmother was nice. I am looing forwards to the battle. I wasn't sure I quite got it but was Naro trying to protect Christian from the fight? If so, she's so nice! I think Christian's role is going to be interesting in the fight and probably important while he's at it too. It better be good.
You are doing a great job of building up to it! I'm loving reading ^.^
Deanie x
I CAN'T I SIMPLY CANNOT FUNCTION RIGHT NOW

Tirion and Morrow, asdfghjkl can they just marry already or kiss
or do moreor SOMETHING but I cannot I just- I can see why you love them so much. ;__; They are too perfect for words.Okay, so the fact that Tirion chose throne over love makes me angry, but hey, it looks like he's regretting his mistake and totally flashing them lover boy eyes at Morrow, and the protectiveness Ronin and Finn have for Morrow is just too perfect. I love Ronin's reaction to Tirion putting the moves on Morrow xD Please have him say something to the elf prince! I would just love to see them get in each other's faces and Morrow's trying to break it up and actually wait, have Ronin also fall in love with Morrow *-* THAT WOULD BE PERFECT.
I'm just fangirling over here, don't mind me, BUT FINALLY Christian! Ugh, they finally kissed :') I'm happy and smug like Conrad is <33
I'm still sad that Conrad had to lose his leg, but I kinda saw this coming.
I'm still curious to know what went down between Lisa and Conrad whenever she finally saw him, so do tell us sometime soon xD I'm betting she slapped him, but seeing as how she didn't see him until his leg was getting amputated... >_> I bet she's saving the angry fit for after the big battle, eh?
WHEN WILL WE SEE MORROW?! I'll bet he's a cocky SOB and is mean and cruel and arrogant and I just wanna see him already okay.
Also, I didn't forget what you told me, that this would have a tragic ending, and I SWEAR IF HE KILLS MINERVA, YOU WILL DIE. I'm fr srs. >:(
(Post more pls)
So let me just ask (not to ignore your fangirling, because I was literally laughing out loud at pretty much that entire review), was that middle chapter good, then? Because I just wrote that recently and added it in because my maid of honor said we needed to know a bit more about Tirion and Morrow's backstory, like why they aren't together. (And this isn't complete details, but at least it's something to be getting on with.)
P.S. You were still first...FOR NOW. <3