I don't know what to say really, but i very much like this poem. the style is...different...to what i have seen before but i still think that this is quite brilliant. i only wish that it could be longer. i think that the last line doesn't really finish it unfortunately, but in my infinite ignorance i don't know if that would be the point or not. as you can probably tell, i don't know much about poems, but i really love the flow of this peice and i think it should be frontpaged.
Points: 329
Reviews: 5
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