Hey! So, I finally got around to finishing my short story Marley, which you reviewed the first draft--which was very short. I lengthened it, and was wondering if you would review it for me. Much appreciated. Marley (Revised)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
My computer's playing up when I try to review something now though... I might have to do yours, Halycon, later on. I will have made my computer work by then.
Off topic, I love the musical Oliver. I was in it. Funfun. Judging by the name of this thread, I'm gonna say that you like it, too. Or maybe the book/movie. Anyway. That is all.
No, I lied. It isn't. Any connection between the musical/movie/book and you character in your novel
/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./ — Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)
Would you mind checking out another poem? Thanks!
