This is the second poem I ever wrote, I wrote it about two and a half years ago... Just want to know what you think, it's free verse...
I dream of the nothingness and of the pain.
Under an unwelcoming shelter of an endless sea of trees,
where the silence is an overwhelming burden to bare.
Where the darkening twilight sends shadows dancing across the earth,
and in the emptiness of night, I search.
I hurry though the dark night without a path.
I run and run, growing frantic with the passing hours,
but still even in the dark gloom of night I search.
I try to go faster but my legs won't move,
and in all my haste I trip and fall to the earth.
As the pain starts to come in waves like lightning,
I find I can’t remember what I was searching for.
The pain becomes unbearable as I realize
that I had nothing to search for;
That there was never anything but the night and twilight shadows.
As the pain strikes its final blow,
I know that there is nothing left for me.
Nothing but the pain and emptiness.
I awake from my dream screaming and I cry,
because the details of my dream are my reality.
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