Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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It has no connection whatsoever :D

Actually, that's not true. I do like Oliver the movie and musical... Plus, I just like the name Oliver, especially with Ollie as a nickname. If I can't think of well suited name's for my characters, I tend to name them based on name's I like. I'm sad like that.
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Oh, and I've finished all reviews now!

Anyone else? :smt001
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Hey Skins, long time no see/begging for reviews :)

I doubt you'll remember, but a long time ago, you reviewed something of mine at the time called "The Battle".

It now has a proper title and is the Prologue to a novel I'm co-writing with my sister, called Reprisal.

I was wondering if you could re-review it [link above](as it's changed by a huge amount), and possibly have a look at Chapter One as well (in your spare time, of course).

If the posts are too long, definitely don't feel obliged to review - I'm sure someone else deserves the reviews more than me anyway :P

Thanks,
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Hello! Me agian! I liked your reviews so thought I'd ask you to review another poem of mine... topic69314.html
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Aaaaalll done! :smt003

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Hey Skins!

So I wrote a short story for the week long contest and was wondering if you would review it for me! Here's the link:

topic69431.html

Please and thank you!
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Yours is done, HomelessPorcupine 8)

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Hey, Can you review my short story, [September Contest] It's What I Do? Thanksies!
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I've finished yours, Ultra!

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Whatssup Skinny Skins!

Will you review my short poem? I would really appreciate some comments or harsh feedbacks on it.

Here is the magical link-ie: post763029.html#p763029

Thanks in advance! :3
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I've finished your review, Yuri 8)

Anymore takers...?
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Hi, Skins! Me again. :smt003 Mind checking this poem out for me? Thanks!

topic69388.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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I've finished your, blackbird. Another epic poem. ;)

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Hey Skins!

I finally finished that poem and short story I've been promising! Links:

Story: topic69639.html

Poem: topic69633.html

:) Thanks!
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Hey there Skins! :]
I like you to review the first [ prologue part 1 ] (hah! xD) for me, thanks!

Prologue Part 1: topic69502.html
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.



she slept with wolves without fear, for the wolves knew there was a lion among them.
— r.m. drake