Hey! So, I finally got around to finishing my short story Marley, which you reviewed the first draft--which was very short. I lengthened it, and was wondering if you would review it for me. Much appreciated. Marley (Revised)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
My computer's playing up when I try to review something now though... I might have to do yours, Halycon, later on. I will have made my computer work by then.
Off topic, I love the musical Oliver. I was in it. Funfun. Judging by the name of this thread, I'm gonna say that you like it, too. Or maybe the book/movie. Anyway. That is all.
No, I lied. It isn't. Any connection between the musical/movie/book and you character in your novel
May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death. — An Unknown Bride, Leap Year
Would you mind checking out another poem? Thanks!
