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Nutty · 2008-10-19T10:06:56Z

Okay guys, I've been here for a while now, and am now an Instructor, so it is time for me to buckle down and help out! What I will critique: -Anything from the fiction forums. i.e Sci-fi, Fantasy, Other fiction etc. -If you want me to critique fanfiction, however, check if I know what it is based on first, or I'll be lost! -I'm willing to give my opinion on art, but I'm no guru. What I won't critique: - Poetry. I don't know enough about how poetry works to be much use, I'm afraid ^^ -Lyrics. Can't write a song to save myself. -Scripts Cost: I expect nothing in return, and I will do my best to be as much use as possible :wink: First come, first served. I'll post the title of critiqued stories here: (Now hidden, the list was getting long. Click below to check it out) [spoiler] -Scavenger 1.1- TL-G Wooster (Oct 30th) -Scavenger 1.2- TL-G Wooster (Nov 2nd) -Scavenger 1.3- TL-G Wooster (Nov 2nd) -Heart's illusion prologue- Maki-Chan (Nov 9th) ***sorry for the delay, have been doing exams*** -Heart's illusion- Maki-Chan (Dec 1st) -Project Fugato-Reason Invalid (Dec 1st) -Project Fugato (2)- Reason Invalid (Dec 1st) -Walking in the dark- LovableLittleSock (Dec 1st) -Chapter ten, Childhood-wisemann210 (Dec 3rd) -The Method of Madness-melkor (Dec 3rd) -Well this shouldn't be! prologue- Lord Anzius (Dec 3rd) -The mansion chapter 1- Lord Anzius (Dec 4th) -The mansion chapter 2-Lord Anzius (Dec 6th) -The ripper prologue-Lord Anzius (Dec 6th) -Adelade, a prologue- Lost_in_dreamland (Dec 6th) -Already Won Me- Lilymoore (Dec 8th) -Dr/Mr Vandergaurd-Kissthewitch (Dec 9th) -My Dearest Madelyn-anti-pop (Dec 14th) -Cat steps-Rosey Unicorn (Dec 15th) -The love Note (heavily edited)- Jamie_rocks (Dec 15th) -Come back with me-KailiaMarie (Dec 18th) -Chapter one of my werewolf story- Haruno Sakura (Dec 16th) -Killer's point of View- LilyJamey (Dec 18th) -Poison Love-Night Mistress (Dec 18-19th...done over midnight LOL) -Accidents happen- Kaylyn (Dec 20th) -Poison Love chapter one-Night Mistress (Dec 21st) -Well, this shouldn't be chapter one- Lord Anzius (Dec 21st) -Well, this shouldn't be chapter two- Lord Anzius (Dec 21st) **sorry. Camping and holiday stuff. >

MySunshine

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:18 pm

MySunshine says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:18 pm

Could you review my story, too, please?
Thank you a lot

:D

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:30 am

Moriah Leila says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:30 am

Hey Nutty, since you did such a FANTASTIC job with the last review I was wondering if you might have time to check out the rest of the series. Feel free to take your time, I would just really love your input!!! Thanks!

Chapter Two Part Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Three Part Two
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Five Part Two

As always, if you want any reviews in return feel free to PM me or post a link in my review forum. I REALLy appreciate it!!

I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:04 am

asxz says... · Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:04 am

Hi Nutty! Can you review this for me? Please and thank you!

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Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:01 pm

beckiw says... · Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:01 pm

Hey Nutty

Back for another review if you have time

topic44692.html

It's for Rosey's contest, so I need it ship shape! lol

Thank you!

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Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:06 am

evanrith says... · Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:06 am

here nutty you said to post it here it's my story.

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:50 am

DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:50 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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