If you wouldn't mind. I've re-written the first chapter of my novel in the first person because I felt like I was losing my main character's personality when written in the third. This is part 1 of the chapter, wouldn't mind a quick peek.
Hey, I'm pretty new to this site and I just posted a rewritten version of an earlier story that I would like some advise on.There is heavy cursing, but I think it's essential to the characterization. work.php?id=96809
I'm changing my status to NOT ACCEPTING for the moment as my laptop is broken so I have very little access to the site. As soon as this problem has been resolved, I will catch up with my backlog and then start accepting again. Thank you for your understanding xx
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You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength. — Uncle Iroh
