Hey Rydia! Could you please do me a huge favor and give me some suggestions on my poem that I've written here: work.php?id=100311
I'm planning on submitting it to Kokopelli (The school's literary magazine composed of the best student works throughout the year) so please go all out in critiquing. Thank you so much!
Here's another excerpt from my Supernatural/Sci-fi novel: 'The Journals of Maynard Ray: Dream Casters' work.php?id=100347
Stretching your thoughts beyond logical purview is called imagination. Stretching your thoughts beyond illogical purview is called insanity. I aim for insanity. - Abel Gaiya
I'm changing this to Not Accepting for the moment while I catch up! I've been a bit bogged down with work and poetry this month, but don't worry, I'll get to the reviews sometime soon!
I'm getting ticked off. I've had this last part of the story posted of almost a month. What the Heck? It hasn't been reviewed, or even read by anyone! (I'm trying to contain my anger.) It's called 'Preventing The End Of The World ENDING'.
Have your chin up, and speak up.Otherwise, nothing will get done.And what you need to say, will never be heard.Just be confident in what you say, and stand by it
Greetings, Rydia! I read a recent review and of yours and I really liked the way you made sense of a piece. I have a review request too, but it's on an old work and I needed more general criticism so I am here.
I used to write poetry like this The Spectre of Hatchitt Hill since 8th grade but I felt that poems like these got too long and boring, so I changed to trying shorter ones.
I'd be grateful if you could go through this and tell whether a topic like this might be better suited for a short story, and what kind of things I'd have to keep in mind then? Or if I should try to shorten this? (I'm completely open to other kinds of criticism too)
@Tenyo I'm probably going to regret saying this but yes, I still review anything! What you got?
@Traves Thank you, I'm glad you liked the review and I'll happily take a look at your poem and answer the questions as best I can! I'll have some time this weekend for sure so expect it by Sunday at the latest ^^
This! The sound quality sucks (I have to borrow equipment when record it properly) so abide the technical nuances. I'd like feedback on how it is as an audio or audio/written piece.
Thankyou! Lemme know if there's anything you want in return =]
