Was going to quote the exact section Meshugenah commented on!! <3 Loving each of your poems, but something about #5 is particularly beautiful and haunting. The language in your poetry is just simply breathtaking; you manage to say so much so concisely, which is really an impressive skill. Absolutely love all the nature-themed poetry and can't wait to see more !!
Ooh. I really like the juxtaposition of the warm sun on cool skin in the first stanza. And then the description of the gentleness of the sun in the second.
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"wist how dare you play with my heartstrings like that" ~ winter "wist is in every rp" ~ley “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :slight_smile: <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio