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Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:41 pm
Charm says... · Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:41 pm
welcome to my thread that will hopefully be filled with 30 poems by the end of April, but let's be honest i'll probably fail. if you want to subscribe and watch me slowly go insane and go through a mental break down like i did last April, that'd be neat.

goals:
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-finish NaPo
-don't put so much pressure on myself
-try
-find my poet again
-write about genuine emotions i haven't resolved yet
-come out drastically improved like last April


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Sat Apr 01, 2017 6:54 pm
Audy says... · Sat Apr 01, 2017 6:54 pm
I really love the drawn out "l" sounds throughout the piece and I found it works really well for this kind of hidden aggressiveness. The second stanza is a winner for me, I keep coming back to it and just drooling. The fallen like stones and the authenticity of voice is brilliant.
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Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:59 pm
Charm says... · Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:59 pm
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Fri Apr 07, 2017 8:37 pm
Charm says... · Fri Apr 07, 2017 8:37 pm
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Wed Apr 12, 2017 2:51 am
Charm says... · Wed Apr 12, 2017 2:51 am
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Wed Apr 12, 2017 8:39 am
Virgil says... · Wed Apr 12, 2017 8:39 am
That last one is quite the powerful piece you have there, and admittedly I think I enjoyed it better than the sequel you wrote to the garden poem because it packs more of a punch. <3 Keep up the great work.

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Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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