'Don't they land softly?' The bird breathes to plucked feathers, as they float away...
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note for those unfamiliar with haiku form ~ the lines are 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables ~ loving all the poems in here though, and also love how the themes always bounce around to so many different neat topics.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
