It has a few reviews already, but I have made major edits since then, and there is an important short story writing competition coming up in December so I would like to get better. I will appreciate any and all criticism that you have, and I'll happily re-edit it too, if it keeps the story in the 1k word range. Thanks
Hello there! I would highly appreciate if you can find some time to read a small piece I recently wrote. I m thinking about adding it to a novel I m working on but I m not sure about the story line. It is a first draft and there might be some typos in it. The title is Better than nicotine. Thank you for your time
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