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Sat Nov 24, 2018 2:12 am
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alliyah says...



Lots of requests in right now - I'm slowly making my way through the requests & I'll hopefully have them done in the next week or so. some time soon I'm hoping!

EDIT: Made some progress, here's what I've still got - I'm in finals week & next right now, but will absolutely get through these by the end of December.

Spoiler! :

WRFF Requests
Traves' Poem ( DONE!) :) Sorry for the long wait Traves!
Sunny Side Down

Non-WRFF Requests
Chinku's poem
In between many beauty hunters.

Rascalover's Story Part II
The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 2)
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Sat Jan 12, 2019 1:47 pm
Wordzyy says...



So-called merciless

Hope ya review this when you have got time :)
  





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Mon Apr 29, 2019 10:35 pm
alliyah says...



It only took me 5 months, but I'm caught up again and cautiously re-opened for more poetry reviews.

Exciting!

Please comment below if I have promised you a Review and never got to it - I swear I didn't mean to, I just don't always remember.
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Tue Apr 30, 2019 1:54 pm
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Leviari says...



it's my first time posting my writing so any feedback is very well accepted!

you are my place
  





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Thu May 02, 2019 11:21 pm
alliyah says...



done!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Tue May 07, 2019 7:54 pm
Desdemona says...



Hello,

I would be much obliged if you could review my poetry.

Thanks! You're the besttttttttttt!!

false lives, true dreams.
Excuse you, I'm your friggin' queen!

Don't take it too hard when you lose to me, I always win.


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August 1, 2015 - April 21, 2016: BlackCatXx
April 21, 2016 -- Desdemona
  





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Tue Aug 13, 2019 7:43 pm
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rosette says...



heyyy don't know if you're still accepting requests but I figured I'd drop this off anyhow : )

caramel apple season
On earth I long to be like Him
  





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Sat Aug 17, 2019 3:12 am
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alliyah says...



Caught up!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 12:24 am
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AtlasW says...



this has three reviews on it, but could you review my poem, thunderstorms?

thanks! :)


previously GodHatesMason, GodHatesShane
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 3:20 am
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Tuckster says...



Hey! I'd really love if you could review this poem from NaPo. Please don't be shy and feel free to rip into it; I'll take all the critique I can get and can assure you I won't take it personally!
Do not try to be pretty. You weren't meant to be pretty; you were meant to burn down the earth and graffiti the sky. Don't let anyone ever simplify you to just 'pretty'

If there is hope, it must lie in the proles.
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:55 am
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fortis says...



I'd love to help you complete team tortoise!
I noticed that you liked Ode to the London Underground and I couldn't help wondering your thoughts on the piece since I myself am a little questioning of my own thoughts on it :]
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 10:51 am
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Liberty says...



Poem

It already has seven reviews, FYI.
dread
/dred/
noun

the moment when you play a prank on a good friend and they react badly and you're afraid your friendship is over
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2019 3:16 am
alliyah says...



Caught up!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Fri Nov 29, 2019 1:33 pm
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Zenith says...



Hi!
Can you please review my poem [url Red That We See][/url]
I'm looking for general criticism. It would be great if you could comment on the main idea and if I got the message across properly.
Thank you.
Last edited by Zenith on Mon Jul 13, 2020 4:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Let's just die young or live forever.
  





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Fri Feb 07, 2020 5:13 pm
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Glauke says...



Hi, I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at my most recent poem.

Aquatic Flight

Thank you!
❁❁❁

be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  








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