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rawrafied
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Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:11 am
rawrafied says... · Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:11 am
I would be most indebted if you could review this: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 1: Yes, A Charming Man, Indeed.

The exact year is 1802.




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GoldFlame
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Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:51 pm
GoldFlame says... · Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:51 pm
Hey, @rawrafied! Review Day's stolen most of my juice, but I'll get to you pronto.
Last edited by GoldFlame on Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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rawrafied
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:46 am
rawrafied says... · Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:46 am
Completely understandable. No rush. Work at your leisure. ^_^




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GoldFlame
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 am
GoldFlame says... · Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 am
Completed! Great piece. :D
Last edited by GoldFlame on Mon Oct 13, 2014 2:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
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rhiasofia
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:17 pm
rhiasofia says... · Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:17 pm
l'd love to have one of these two reviewed. Whichever intrigues you the most. They're both poems.

My Heart a Goldfinch
My Heart a Goldfinch

Let the World Stay Dark
Let the World Stay Dark

Thanks!
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Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:20 pm
WritingWolf says... · Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:20 pm
Could I get a review on Horton's Egg please?
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GoldFlame
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Fri Feb 28, 2014 4:11 am
GoldFlame says... · Fri Feb 28, 2014 4:11 am
Alright, it's been a while, but...

All completed!
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GoldFlame
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Wed Mar 12, 2014 10:29 am
GoldFlame says... · Wed Mar 12, 2014 10:29 am
Hello? Hello? (:
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DrFeelGood
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Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:14 am
DrFeelGood says... · Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:14 am
Hi goldflame, I have written a short story which has some grammatical mistakes and I am not able to rectify them. I request you to help me with it and may be give your opinion. Thanks!

A Godly Affair




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NerdBird
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Thu Mar 13, 2014 10:48 pm
NerdBird says... · Thu Mar 13, 2014 10:48 pm
Would love it if you could review my short story Zom-Brawl Gold! :D

Really appreciate your feedback! :) And its a short story one-off this time! ;)




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wordsy
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Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:20 am
wordsy says... · Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:20 am
Hi there! I've just joined this site today and I already like the friendly atmosphere!

I would greatly appreciate a review on my piece: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109537.

Thank you so much! :D
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GoldFlame
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Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:22 pm
GoldFlame says... · Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:22 pm
All completed!
Last edited by GoldFlame on Wed Mar 19, 2014 12:05 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Laure
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 5:49 am
Laure says... · Tue Mar 18, 2014 5:49 am
Evening

I would appreciate your review on this very much!

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