Desperate to review!

Hi goldflame! Thanks a lot for your awesome review! I have written an experimental short, 'Her Agony' which is not more than 350 words, which is about 'no strings attached relationship' and something more.I hope you have a look at it.
Her Agony

Hello @GoldFlame!
I would love it if you reviewed my newest dystopian Science fiction!
Warm as Ice, Chapter 2: Notus.

*sidles in*

Could you please review this for me?

The Reality Syndrome

Thanks!

*sidles out*

Hi,

If you could review my new piece:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109786

I would be especially grateful.

Regards,
Sunkissed

Please review:

Sorceress: Chapter 5

Thank you!!!!!!!

All completed!

hey there, I need review of the chapter I just wrote so i request you to review this Diakrino- the darkness within (chapter 2) and if possible please also review the first chapter as well. I'd be highly grateful to you.Thanks.

Hi Goldflame, I have posted a short story about exam result. Exam Result Waiting for your review.

Hey Goldy!

A favour for a friend? Shadows

If you're not too busy: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 2

I'd love to review something in return!

Gaurav's and Gaurav's, done!

All completed! Oh, and @Zontafer, no payment.

Hm, okay. xD
Thanks again for an awesome review!

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Hi Goldflame! I am editing my review request. I have got lot of reviews for the first chapter and the prologue of my novel. However some of my YWS friends who haven't reviewed the story, found my chapter quite dull and boring. I am really confused because the reviewers aside from technical nitpicks have said good things about the plot,characters and the pacing.

Can you please read the story and advise me (I know you give straightforward advise, and I really like it) whether I should continue the chapters or restart the story again. Thanks! And I know, you will give your honest opinion

The Perfect Thief (Revised) Chapter 1