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GoldFlame
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Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:11 pm
GoldFlame says... · Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:11 pm
I'll do...

Any genre, any format. Satire, historical fiction, haikus. I'm more familiar with prose, but I'll review poetry, as well. And prose poetry.

I won't do...

  • Pieces with 4+ decent reviews
  • Essays on controversial topics (religion, abortion, etc.)
  • Fanfictions (exceptions: HP, Sherlock, DW, LOTR)
  • Lyrics

Novels

A no (at the moment). As soon as I'm back on track, I'll do individual chapters.

Review Content

I specialize in grammar, style, voice, and fluency. With me, you'll get loads of nitpicks, ranging from typos to unnecessary prepositions. But I'll compensate. I can always find something positive about a piece.

Review Length

I can't provide a definite length. It jumps around. Check out my last two/three, if you want.

Price

Free! :mrgreen:
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LordGreenleaf
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Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:54 pm
LordGreenleaf says... · Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:54 pm
Hi there! Could you review my poem

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108098
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GoldFlame
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:09 am
GoldFlame says... · Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:09 am
Completed!
Last edited by GoldFlame on Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:47 am, edited 1 time in total.
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RachelLeeAnn
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 3:21 pm
RachelLeeAnn says... · Wed Jan 29, 2014 3:21 pm
Would love for you to review this! :)
Masks.
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GoldFlame
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:55 pm
GoldFlame says... · Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:55 pm
Completed! Who's next?
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FatCowsSis
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Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:12 pm
FatCowsSis says... · Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:12 pm
I'd love it if you could do this one for me!
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GoldFlame
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Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:02 pm
GoldFlame says... · Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:02 pm
Completed! Happy Valentine's Day :P.
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Rook
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 12:19 am
Rook says... · Sat Feb 15, 2014 12:19 am
I'll take you up on this cause you're desperate! ;)
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

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GoldFlame
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 1:47 am
GoldFlame says... · Sat Feb 15, 2014 1:47 am
Completed! Happy Valentine's to you, as well.
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TriSARAHtops
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 6:22 am
TriSARAHtops says... · Sat Feb 15, 2014 6:22 am
Hi, would you be absolutely wonderful an review the second chapter of my novella? I've got stacks of reviews on chapter one, but the second has been languishing in the green room for a while. Here's the link:Saltwater Wounds - Chapter Two
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GoldFlame
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:22 pm
GoldFlame says... · Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:22 pm
Completed! Who's next?
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Sonder
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Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:23 am
Sonder says... · Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:23 am
If you can find anything in my portfolio that has less than four reviews, I will take any I can get! :)
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GoldFlame
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Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:27 pm
GoldFlame says... · Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:27 pm
Aspirations On an Aristocrat completed!
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NerdBird
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Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:45 pm
NerdBird says... · Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:45 pm
Hi there goldflame! I would love it if you could review the first two chapters of my novel The Shifties! :D

Please forgive the first chapter as the first section was intended to be entirely separate from the rest as a chapter of its own, but editing on my part ballsed it up! :)

chapter 1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108653
chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108737

Much appreciated! I look forward to reading your feedback! :)

Nerd Bird
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GoldFlame
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Sat Feb 22, 2014 3:33 am
GoldFlame says... · Sat Feb 22, 2014 3:33 am
Both completed!
Last edited by GoldFlame on Fri Feb 28, 2014 8:04 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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