I really enjoyed reading this piece. it made me aware of how peaceful the world really is before the sun rises and the people wake. You have made such a simple piece stand out to me. The use of the words you chose helped the message become clear. I can relate to what this is saying because i have so many times wished to return to night, where the world is silent for a moment. The worries, anxieties, and the fears seem to subside for just a few short hours until the sun rises allowing all of that to be re instilled into our minds. Thanks for writing a great poem!
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