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GoldFlame · 2014-01-25T20:11:48Z

I'll do... Any genre, any format. Satire, historical fiction, haikus. I'm more familiar with prose, but I'll review poetry, as well. And prose poetry. I won't do... Pieces with 4+ decent reviews Essays on controversial topics (religion, abortion, etc.) Fanfictions (exceptions: HP, Sherlock, DW, LOTR) Lyrics Novels A no (at the moment). As soon as I'm back on track, I'll do individual chapters. Review Content I specialize in grammar, style, voice, and fluency. With me, you'll get loads of nitpicks, ranging from typos to unnecessary prepositions. But I'll compensate. I can always find something positive about a piece. Review Length I can't provide a definite length. It jumps around. Check out my last two/three, if you want. Price Free! :mrgreen:

GoldFlame

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Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:04 pm

GoldFlame says... · Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:04 pm

All completed!

“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams

DrFeelGood

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Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:27 am

DrFeelGood says... · Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:27 am

Hi Goldflame! I have updated my story
The Perfect Thief Chapter 2 Waiting for your awesome review.

Thanks.

GoldFlame

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Sun Apr 27, 2014 3:52 am

GoldFlame says... · Sun Apr 27, 2014 3:52 am

Feel free to bombard me, y'all. It's Review Day, and me team's behind!

Last edited by GoldFlame on Sun Apr 27, 2014 10:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.

“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams

gauravkundu32

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Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:41 am

gauravkundu32 says... · Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:41 am

Please review this Diakrino- The darkness within (Chapter 3)
Thank you

Always Hope for the BEST

GoldFlame

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Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:30 am

GoldFlame says... · Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:30 am

Sorry, forgot to post that it's completed.

“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams

ulala8

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Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:51 pm

ulala8 says... · Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:51 pm

The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
Every chapter needs reviews after chapter one (preferably 4-6)

Benrobertringrose

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Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:19 pm

Benrobertringrose says... · Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:19 pm

Hi there,

Would really appreciate a review on this piece:

The Long Weekend: Part 1.

Thanks so much in advance!

Ben

DudeMcGuy

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Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:30 pm

DudeMcGuy says... · Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:30 pm

Hi Goldflame,

Here is the chapter I told you about. It's split into two parts because it's too long otherwise (and x2 review points for you

).

The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (1/2)
The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (2/2)

I typed up a quick summary of the story up to that point. Hopefully it helps out a bit. Whenever you have time is fine.

Thanks in advance,
-Dude

When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I

GoldFlame

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Mon Jun 23, 2014 5:22 am

GoldFlame says... · Mon Jun 23, 2014 5:22 am

Gosh, it's been ages. I completed Ben's and Dude's, and Ulala's should come.

“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams