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Reopened! (not that it was ever really closed, I just neglected it. Poor baby)

Who needs a review?
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Hi I'd love if you could review my short story here: Queen Bee- any critique welcome
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.




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Noelle!! If you could leave one of your lovely reviews on this: Elementární ~ 1.1 *adjusted* (and 1.2 if you have the time), I'd really appreciate it! ^^

<3 Thanks!
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Hey there!

I could really use a review on one or both of these. The first one has no reviews, and the second only has one :(. Thanks!

Autotonomy and Apoptosis

Hydrolysis
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Noelleeeeee, heeeeeey!

I've started (trying) to write my novel again, and if I remember correctly you read and reviewed several of the chapters when I first started posting it way back when. I've written a new second chapter for it, so I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors - Chapter Two

Thanks, and of course I shall return the favour the second you ask me!
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Please get me out of the green room :(

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Hi Noelle! I hope that you're well. I was wondering if you could review one of the following, you can choose:
Winter
The Musical Composition of Life
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After months and months of neglect, I'm reopening my thread. Just in time for summer so I can over commit myself to things and actually get them done :3
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

YWS is life




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@Noelle

I have a poem I need some feedback on. It's called Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE

Let me know if you're able to review it.

Thanks!
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:) If you want, you can review my story.

The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~ :D Thanks
Bethany R.




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Please review my story chapter. :D Bad Lights, Good Lights (Chapter One Point Two)
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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I'm satisfied with youre review so please review my novel again. :D Bad Lights, Good Lights (Chapter One Point Three)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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It's that time of year again! Who needs a review?
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

YWS is life




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Hey! Please review this School Kids poem of mine. It only has one review. :( Like it if you like it! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Hey,

I need some harsh criticism on this one and I think it needs more editing. If you can find some time to take a look at it, I would truly appreciate that.

Untitled Novel : [Chapter 3: Somewhat Vegetarian]
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