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Heeeelllllooooo people of YWS! :D

Do you have a short story, novel, or poem that you'd love to have reviewed?? Then this is the place for you!

If you need something reviewed, just drop a link in a reply below! I'll get to it within two days or less.

Things I will review:
1. Novel chapters (Nothing over three chapters, please. And if you post a chapter here that's later than the first chapter just know that I will read all previous chapters first in order to understand what is going on)
2. Short Stories
3. Poems

Things I will not review:
1. Lyrics. I feel like I really can't help anyone with this because I don't know what I would say.
2. Essays/Articles. One look at my grades and you'll know why this is in the will not review column.

Keep writing!
**Noelle**
Last edited by Noelle on Mon Feb 01, 2016 2:22 am, edited 14 times in total.
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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My dearest Noelle. I have posted my second poetic attempt to YWS and as I believe you have reviewed my prose before(?) I would love a review from you on my poetry. Plz and Thx. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100106




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Anyone else need reviews??
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

YWS is life




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Yes pleaseeeee. This is a short story, mystery.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101327
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Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




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Would you review my poem? Please and thank you.

work.php?id=101373




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Hey noelle :) Id love if you would review my second chapter of Risk for me :). P.s. I have revised my previous two entries, and would love if you read them again. Only if you want to though. Im in the middle of editing, and I found that I couldnt get very far, and that I needed outside opinion, and yours poped up in my head as the very best. Thank you so much :)
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This has to be reviewed ASAP. I need this for my exam practicing, and it is tomorrow!

work.php?id=101795

It's roughly 800 words, so it'll take a minimal amount of time :)
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Hey Noelle,

could you review this for me, please?

work.php?id=101858

Thanks




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It would be great if you could review this short story of mine. It's a mystery/horror, thanks in advance! :)




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Noelleeeeeeeeeeeee,

Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel when you find the time, please? It's something I posted way back in September and if I remember correctly, you read it when I posted it back then. As a result, I'm really curious to see what you think of the slightly revamped version:

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

I've also tried to edit accordingly with the reviews I have already, so I'd like to see if said editing has actually been successful.

Thanks a bundle! :)
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Just recently reopened my thread! Come on by if you have a request! :)
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

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Could you review Devil Touch Prologue (New) for me? I've been waiting forever and there's only so much patience my brain can hold XD Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ><
Sushi




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Hello could you review mine, please! :)The Angelon Kingdom (Draft)
and if you have time, this is my baby...Kiss the Damsel Chapter One
Sincerely, Amanda R. Holden, Author of Azyea's GIfts




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Hey Noelle,

I was wondering if you could review this for me:
Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers



I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
— Leonardo da Vinci