Reviews From a Powerpuff Girl

I would really like for you to review the first chapter of this novel I'm working on. I'd especially like opinions on how interesting it is to you personally. Please review as you normally do and also include personal thoughts and opinions, good or bad. Thanks!

Scolopendra

Glorious Fantasy Ch.1: A New world

At the moment I am just trying to pump out as many chapters as I possibly can before I burn out. So the grammar is a bit bad. But if you can stand it, I more wanna see what you think of the story as you read it. Also, how many chapters you can stand reading.

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