Hey could you quick review my piece here? work.php?id=96942
thankyou! It's not very long.
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my short story. It's in three parts, because I've found a lot of text is hard to read all at once online, but together its just under 4,000 words. I need the first part to be critiqued the most, because it has no comments, but I would really like the entire thing done.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
do you remember the 'hypothetically' dead man? well, I have written another sequel. can you please get a look at it. it'll be very helpful to me. Thanks work.php?id=97343
P.S. If you're getting bored with Tasia PM me and I'll stop pestering you. Don't know if it's your type of story or not. If not, it's cool.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hey Alf I had written another story about that dead man and because you had read the previous ones I was wondering if you could take a look at it.. You don't have to if you don't want to.
