Hey if you have some time I'd love the Point out Review for this poem, I re-wrote it a couple times, and would like someone to review it. And also it's fine if it takes a while too, I'm patient! Thanks again!!
~Ally-wa
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
Not sure what type of review I want, so I suppose you can do whatever strikes your fancy when you're writing the review. I'm not real sensitive, so feel free to be brutal if my piece needs it.
My request today is on the prologue and first chapter of a novel I'm writing (fantasy).
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
hey Alf, i wrote this short story a few days ago and am not quite sure where it stands, so if you have and all all, could you please review it. here's the link. work.php?id=96269 thanks Puck
This is a short piece that's not easily classifiable: work.php?id=96620
I'm not sure what 'type' of review I want. 'Point Out' seems like a good one for this piece, but I'm not scared of the 'Editor' either...so maybe a combination? The 'Editor's Point Out'?
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Would you mind reviewing the first chapters of my piece Welcome to Orba Nova? work.php?id=96135
“ You can't control life, [in writing] at least you can control your version.” ―Chuck Palahniuk, Stranger Than Fiction When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then sit back and let the world wonder how you did it. – Unknown
Thanks again!! 
