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Hi Dreamwalker! :) Would you be willing to review this piece for me? It's a different style of poetry for me, sorta two poems in one. It is entitled "Opportunities." Thanks!

work.php?id=94750
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
http://JRSStories.com
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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Reopened and ready for business.

Ask me and I'll be there. Scouts honour.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Hey, Walker! Because I'm a pain in the butt, could you check out my latest novel for me, please? There are three chapters posted so far, but you can read/review as much or as little as you want.

Here's chapter one: work.php?id=97263

You can get to the others via that if you fancy having a look. Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Hey Walker!

I understand that it's irritating to jump into a novel after it's gotten started, but, well...the reviewers who were helping me went back to school. Dratted school. I've been left for a month without a review on Ch. 5. work.php?id=97541

If you could please review this for me, I'd be willing to beg. :smt089

Thanks! :smt003

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]




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work.php?id=97971

Please?
A pale imitator of a girl in the sky.




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Realistic Fiction short story request~ Would love a nitpicky review to this. I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you so much :)

work.php?id=97881
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco




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i'll pay you with :3s and <3s
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.




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work.php?id=98364

I'll keep you posted regarding further chapters.
#TNT

WRFF




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Could you please check this out?

work.php?id=98487

It's really not the best thing I've ever written. I'm getting back into poetry after a very long hiatus.
-Alex




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Pretty much caught up. Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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work.php?id=98468

I'll hit you back with one on poetry, if you'd like.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html




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All done!

Anymore requests, my dears?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Hey, Please review this work.php?id=98329

If you can, or can't thanks anyway :)
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Done and done.

Keep requesting, lovelies.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S



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