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Caterpillar
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Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:08 pm
Caterpillar says... · Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:08 pm
work.php?id=94155

A poem which is not a poem in many ways and I'd like you to enlighten me about that because I is the Caterpillar and not the wise one.




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Dreamwalker
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Points 17895
Reviews 489
Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:15 pm
Dreamwalker says... · Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:15 pm
You know the drill.

Reopened and awaiting those requests, my lovelies >:3
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Jas
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Points 805
Reviews 336
Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:25 am
Jas says... · Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:25 am
work.php?id=94969

Pretty please? I'll have a response to your other review (thank you btw) tomorrow and I'll definitely review anything you want/need reviewed. <3
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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FallenAngel97
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Points 885
Reviews 31
Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:43 am
FallenAngel97 says... · Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:43 am
Hello! So, I was wondering if you could review this poem for me?
work.php?id=94747
My heart grows cold
My spirit grows weak
I'm losing my faith
I'm losing my grip...




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Dreamwalker
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Points 17895
Reviews 489
Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:10 am
Dreamwalker says... · Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:10 am
Done and done.

Anymore?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Dreamwalker
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Reviews 489
Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:15 am
Dreamwalker says... · Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:15 am
I'm a little disappointed :c.

No requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Twit
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Points 1979
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Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:02 am
Twit says... · Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:02 am
I have a request. It's called... VictoryFREEDOMBob.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir




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Jas
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Reviews 336
Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:52 am
Jas says... · Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:52 am
work.php?id=95019

Lol I'm so annoying.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Dreamwalker
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Points 17895
Reviews 489
Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:05 pm
Dreamwalker says... · Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:05 pm
Jas wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95019

Lol I'm so annoying.


Never, dear! I'd be happy to ;D
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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MischiefManaged
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Points 1576
Reviews 12




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Ikerot
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Points 1072
Reviews 8
Sat May 05, 2012 6:24 pm
Ikerot says... · Sat May 05, 2012 6:24 pm
Heeeey. First time with Walker :D

work.php?id=94631

It's a scifi/fantasy story which has been rewritten :L
"Good begins with evil, and evil is here to stay." - From The Sovereign




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LadySpark
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Points 1599
Reviews 363
Wed May 09, 2012 6:25 pm
LadySpark says... · Wed May 09, 2012 6:25 pm
work.php?id=94886

please and thank you.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame




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Dreamwalker
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Points 17895
Reviews 489
Mon May 14, 2012 12:21 am
Dreamwalker says... · Mon May 14, 2012 12:21 am
Sorry, dears! I'll be to those reviews shortly if you're still interested in having them. Busy is as busy does, unfortunately!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Jalmoc
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Points 561
Reviews 67
Thu May 17, 2012 12:41 pm
Jalmoc says... · Thu May 17, 2012 12:41 pm
Hi Dream! :D I posted a story for English and I'd like it if you could just rip it to shreds and give me all my mistakes. :) I'd really appreciate it. :D What did you call it? Sir Walkington review? Sorry if I got it wrong. :) It's a fantasy fiction story. :) If you would please review it, the link is posted below! :D

work.php?id=95312
If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

When Reality has all but fallen away, recreate your own world




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zohali93
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Points 4226
Reviews 53
Sat May 26, 2012 10:53 pm
zohali93 says... · Sat May 26, 2012 10:53 pm
Hi there!

I'm not sure what the name of the genre I'm writing.(I'm not sure so I choose general)

If you find the time could you review this for me please?
work.php?id=95542
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)



'They are afraid of nothing,' I grumbled, watching their approach through the window. 'Together, they would brave Satan and all his legions.'
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights