Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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I HAVE RETURNED (I think. I mean, let's face it, this is me. I'll probably disappear for a year again within the next week, but hey, I'll give it a shot.)

But yeah, I'm open to review requests again, so run at me with your literary masterpieces!
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Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

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I've escaped my hiatus and am now accepting reviews again!

Who knows how long this will be for, so y'all may as well take advantage of it while it lasts :P
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I will take advantage. Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]! Thanks! :)
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All done! Anyone else need anything reviewed?
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Hey! I need one last review for Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.0, Edited 1]. :D If you think the reviews are enough though, you can go to the second subchapter if you want! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Aaaaaaaall done!

Keep 'em coming, snazpots.
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I'd really appreciate some input on this initial draft of a story I've been cooking for a good long while:

War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

Don't hold back since this IS a legit "babby's first"!

Thanks.




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All done, anyone else? :)
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Me please!
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Me too! Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.1, Edited 1]! :P
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Forgot to update this, oops.

All done with the previous requests, so please run at me with more demands!
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Knight's Gauntlet

I would really appreciate some feedback if you still have the time, I'm editing my second chapter now before I begin on the third.

Thanks in advance if you get to it :)




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