Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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hey
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads."
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Guess who's back, back again.
Skinsy's back, tell a friend


Okay no but seriously, I'm the freest I've been in basically centuries right now until around September time, so this is my return to YWS. My main priority with my return is reviewing because it's actually slightly disturbing how much I've missed doing it. As both a result of my current free time and my desire to review...

This thread is now open for reviews


If you'd like a review, just post your link as a reply to this thread and I'll get on it ASAP. As a warning though, please don't expect anything that... impressive. I haven't reviewed a single thing since probably this time last year, maybe even longer, so I will undoubtedly be rather rusty.

But yes, request away, my pretties!
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Hi, my name is.. what? My name is.. who? My name is wikiwiki addicted2theshindigg

Ok so, here's a story. Somewhat fictional - based on real events.

Read & review as many chapters as you feel like. There's only 3 so far. Or you can cumulatively review them all at the end. Whatever you want.

Enjoy, thanks!




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All done! Anyone else?
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Harnesse - Episode 1 "Warning Signals"

It's a script [gasp], so whatever you can do with it is greatly appreciated. If you could talk about how you felt about the characters, that'd be extra-super amazing. Thanks!
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That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"




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Done! Next?
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Would it be possible for you to review this?

Thanks in advance!
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

A review?




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Voila, finished! Anyone else?
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I am bloodthirsty.

Please feed me.
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Le one et le two for your thoughtful consideration.
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If you have the time and energy, Skins. :D

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Done, done, and done! Anyone else?
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can you review this for me?

In Dream Sequence

thanks.




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Could you please review my story.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106164Sorry that I have to give you the URL, I'm new here and don't really know how to properly post stuff in the forums.
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