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Lava · 2010-04-01T16:57:20Z

Drop some requests through the crater. Not accepting, if 'Dormant.' I will review : I would love to do any Art & Photography piece. And fiction, I will be happy to review Sci-fic, Romance, Other. I wouldn’t mind Fantasy and Action/Adventure. Non-fiction : Well, it depends. But do post your link here, I’ll definitely say something about it. This volcano will not consider : Poetry (Any kind. Trust me, you do not want my reviews on poetry.) Chapters (Well, as long as it’s the first, it’s fine. Don’t tell me to review chapter 5.) Fanfiction. (I’m a fan of fanfics, but I just won’t review them.) Advanced Critiques. (Sorry, I just don't have enough time.) Art/ Photography : I will look for visual appeal, flow, style, my perceptions, lighting, editing and other errors. Do resize your pictures before putting it up. Please? Fiction : If you want me to look at something in particular, you can ask. If you need help with grammar, I'd be happy to help out. Otherwise, I'd go about commenting on the story, description and a few nitpicks(I just can't seem to not point them out) _______________________________________________________________ Well, I guess that’s it. So go ahead, post your links below. ~Lava

katchaerin

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Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:54 am

katchaerin says... · Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:54 am

Hey lava!
Glad I found you. XD
Could you review my novel? Thanks so much.
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viewtopic.php?t=66833

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THANKS! Those are chapters 1, 2 and 3.

-KAT <3

REVIEW!!!
'cause I review back. XD XD XD

Prosithion

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Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:09 am

Prosithion says... · Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:09 am

Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'.

I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you.

novel.php?id=461

It's speculative science fiction.

Thanks,
Pros

"wub wub wub wub. Now Zoidberg is the popular one."

"Computer... Captain's musk"

Sionarama

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Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:13 pm

Sionarama says... · Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:13 pm

Hi Im a beginner artist!!!
Please review my Manga piece.
I don't know how to put up the link so that you will just have to go through my profile... sorry!

Thanks sooooo much!!!
Sionarama

"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!"
Not all princesses are pink sparkles.
Exhibit A

Lava

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Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:55 pm

Lava says... · Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:55 pm

Done!

~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

Shearwater

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Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:06 pm

Shearwater says... · Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:06 pm

Hey Lava! It's Pink, just wondering if you had some time to review this story of mine?
topic67551.html
Thanks a bunch!

~Pink

(Don't worry, it's chapter one)

There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham

Jas

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Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:18 pm

Jas says... · Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:18 pm

Hey,

I was wondering if you would review this. It's the first chapter of this story I'm trying out.

Thanks

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~Jas

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Razzker

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Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:26 am

Razzker says... · Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:26 am

Hi, Lava!

Could you review my short story? It's in the Fantasy genre. Thanks in advance!

Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes

Check out my blog: Razztazztic!

blackbird12

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Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:57 pm

blackbird12 says... · Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:57 pm

Could you review this short story for me? Thanks!

topic67610.html

If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver

Shindig

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Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:29 am

Shindig says... · Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:29 am

Hey Lava! I dont know who you are, but I'm glad I found you!

Do you mind reading/reviewing my short story, "Poppet"? It's fictional, and originally intended to be a tragedy. The link is below:

POPPET

Thanks alot!

p.s. The land of dosas and paneer? I would love to go there! =P

Hecate

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Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:14 pm

Hecate says... · Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:14 pm

Hey, could you review this for me? I just edited it...again. Thank you!!

It's fantasy fiction by the way

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Jenthura

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Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:37 pm

Jenthura says... · Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:37 pm

Hey Lava, I know you aren't accepting and all, and I'm sorry to inconvenience you, but...it was my prize from the contest, remember?

"Your Story is About..."

-ж-Ж-ж-

funkyreg101

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Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:12 am

funkyreg101 says... · Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:12 am

Hi! My name is regan, could you review either of the peices of my novel Racing to Death? Thanks a bundle!

novel.php?id=797

One day your prince will come... Mine? He took a wrong left turn, got lost, and is too stubburn to ask for directions.

Sins

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Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:38 pm

Sins says... · Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:38 pm

Hey, Lava!

When you have the time, could you review the first chapter of my novel? There is a prologue before it, but I think you should be okay without reading that.

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Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.