So this is the either the prologue or the first chapter (I haven't decided yet because it's pretty long for a prologue) of my NaNo novel, Against All Odds. It's a mix of fantasy and action/adventure. Warning that it has been minimally edited so that my muse wouldn't go beserks over it during November. XD And also, I really don't care what kind of review you give me--whatever floats your boat.
"There's a big difference between shooting a target and shooting a charging Wargal. A target isn't usually trying to kill you." ~Halt, Ranger's Apprentice Book Two: The Burning Bridge
Mind doing a review? Here's it:(you've read the first two parts, only I posted it from BlueShubs, and now I've changed the title, too) Know I'm Here(2)
Thanks a bunch, Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
May you please review and critique my first chapter. You can read the what kind of review I would like in the topic thread. Thanks a lot for even reading it, I'm sorry if it seems too tedious. Thanks very much in advance. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post801572.html#p801572
I'm planning to do a 100 reviews this month, so about 4 reviews a day. If I'm free-er I'll do more, so go ahead, post your requests, I'm not restricting posts per day or anything.
I accept any prose except fan fiction. Poetry, only ask me if you's like some half-coherent thoughts. And any Art/Photography is okay too! If you want review on a particular chapter, please let me have a summary.
If you want me to look at something in particular, you can ask. If you need help with grammar, I'd be happy to help out. Otherwise, I'd go about commenting on the story, description and a few nitpicks(I just can't seem to not point them out)
And, if it's a novel with 3+ chapters, I'll take up only one. And once that's done, I'll let you know.
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~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
