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Lava · 2010-04-01T16:57:20Z

Drop some requests through the crater. Not accepting, if 'Dormant.' I will review : I would love to do any Art & Photography piece. And fiction, I will be happy to review Sci-fic, Romance, Other. I wouldn’t mind Fantasy and Action/Adventure. Non-fiction : Well, it depends. But do post your link here, I’ll definitely say something about it. This volcano will not consider : Poetry (Any kind. Trust me, you do not want my reviews on poetry.) Chapters (Well, as long as it’s the first, it’s fine. Don’t tell me to review chapter 5.) Fanfiction. (I’m a fan of fanfics, but I just won’t review them.) Advanced Critiques. (Sorry, I just don't have enough time.) Art/ Photography : I will look for visual appeal, flow, style, my perceptions, lighting, editing and other errors. Do resize your pictures before putting it up. Please? Fiction : If you want me to look at something in particular, you can ask. If you need help with grammar, I'd be happy to help out. Otherwise, I'd go about commenting on the story, description and a few nitpicks(I just can't seem to not point them out) _______________________________________________________________ Well, I guess that’s it. So go ahead, post your links below. ~Lava

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Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:45 pm

MiaParamore says... · Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:45 pm

Would you like to review my fashion designs? The link is: Designs!

Thanks in advance!

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Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:26 pm

Lava says... · Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:26 pm

That's done. Anymore?

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Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:33 am

canislupis says... · Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:33 am

Me!

Here's my general-fiction short story: post695936.html?hilit=the quarter#p695936

Thanks!

Lupis

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Fri Apr 30, 2010 5:20 pm

MiaParamore says... · Fri Apr 30, 2010 5:20 pm

Hey Lava. Would you review this?A Criminal's HEart~ Chapter-5

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Mon May 10, 2010 9:46 am

Lava says... · Mon May 10, 2010 9:46 am

Okay, bumps this up.

Anyone need anything?

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Mon May 10, 2010 1:56 pm

Hecate says... · Mon May 10, 2010 1:56 pm

Hey there Lava, could you review this?

viewtopic.php?t=63316

Thanks xxx

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Sat May 22, 2010 9:56 am

MiaParamore says... · Sat May 22, 2010 9:56 am

Hi Lava, I would love a review on the seventh chapter of my novel. You'll find the link in my signature. Thanks in advance!

~Shubhi

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Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sat May 22, 2010 11:56 am

Lava says... · Sat May 22, 2010 11:56 am

Shubhi, done.

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- Ian McEwan in Atonement

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Tue May 25, 2010 2:24 am

Yuriiko says... · Tue May 25, 2010 2:24 am

hey there, Lava!

Can you review my work?
It's a romantic short story.
here the link: topic64143.html

thanks in advance! :mrgreen:

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Wed May 26, 2010 10:43 am

MiaParamore says... · Wed May 26, 2010 10:43 am

Link: Love Has No Boundaries

Could you review this?

Thanks!

~Shubhi

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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Thu May 27, 2010 5:53 am

Lava says... · Thu May 27, 2010 5:53 am

DONE!

Anyone else?

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Sat May 29, 2010 2:52 pm

Kaedee says... · Sat May 29, 2010 2:52 pm

ME! I would love a review on two drawings (portraits, basically) that are here. They're based off of real photos of real people.
Take your time. Thank you!

~KD

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