Lava's Volcano [Active]

Drop some requests through the crater.
Not accepting, if 'Dormant.'

I will review :

I would love to do any Art & Photography piece.
And fiction, I will be happy to review Sci-fic, Romance, Other. I wouldn’t mind Fantasy and Action/Adventure.
Non-fiction : Well, it depends. But do post your link here, I’ll definitely say something about it.

This volcano will not consider :

Poetry (Any kind. Trust me, you do not want my reviews on poetry.)
Chapters (Well, as long as it’s the first, it’s fine. Don’t tell me to review chapter 5.)
Fanfiction. (I’m a fan of fanfics, but I just won’t review them.)
Advanced Critiques. (Sorry, I just don't have enough time.)


Art/ Photography : I will look for visual appeal, flow, style, my perceptions, lighting, editing and other errors. Do resize your pictures before putting it up. Please?


Fiction :If you want me to look at something in particular, you can ask. If you need help with grammar, I'd be happy to help out.
Otherwise, I'd go about commenting on the story, description and a few nitpicks(I just can't seem to not point them out)



_______________________________________________________________


Well, I guess that’s it. So go ahead, post your links below.


~Lava

Hey! Could you critique my artwork? It's a portrait, mainly focused on the girl's hair. Thanks, Lava. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post683123.html#p683123
~KD
(Love it...'Lava's Volcano'... ) Btw, my artwork is resized.

KD.

Thanks for the request. It's done (I hope it's the right picture.)

Any one else?

Hi Lava. Thanks for reviewing that day. i8 wnat a review for my chapter-3 of a criminal's Heart. Thanks.
A criminal's heart chapter-3

Hey could you do this? Thanks! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post684136.html#p684136

Jasmine, Shubhi Done!

Any more requests?

Hey Lava

Could you please review my fiction?

Can You See Me?

It's chapter two and I know you said you don't want to do any chapters, but I could do with some help on it! If you feel like you need to, the link for chapter one of it is in the post.

Thanks in advance

xoxo Skins

Hello.
Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: post687280.html
If you would like me to review something of yours in return let me know!
Thanks in advance,
Sophie

Hi, a short fast novella for you attention. If it sucks you in it's fast that is. If you can't go past the first few pages, that's OK too, just try to explain why please:)
topic61868.html

Hey! It's me again! (Not that I'm stalking you...)

I'm not sure if you do advanced critiques, but will you review my novella? It's literally only 20 something pages long, so it's pretty short!

If not, that's fine.

The Beauty In Ugly

Thanks!

xoxo Skins

Hey Napalm and Skins.
Sorry, I should've mentioned I don't do Advanced Crits.
Really sorry. I just don't have enough time.

(:

Hey Lava,
I'd really like a review for the 2nd chapter of my action/adventure story. It's got swearing in it so I hope you don't mind, if that is a problem then don't worry.
Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62053.html
The link for the first chapter is at the end in case you wanna know what happened in the beginning.
Thanks!

Hey there, I would like a review on this :3

viewtopic.php?t=62029

It's the second chapter, but I don't think it's necessary to read the first to understand it... it's as good as a stand-alone itself. Thank you.

Okay, so anyone need something reviewed?

Hi, please review this! I am a beginning writer! Thanks!
[url]
post692600.html#p692600
[/url]