Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

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CarbonCore-Done!
Roal-Done!
Spike-Done!
Flower~child-Done!
Jenny-Done!
Jash-Done!

Alright, if anyone else needs a review, I'm free. :)
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Hey, please review this. It's just a short prologue, and I'm new-ish to writing so I'd really appreciate any help and advice that I can get. Thanks!
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Hey again Shear!
I'm not sure if I'm allowed to ask for another review so quickly after you reviewed the previous work (and besides, it doesn't happen very often that I post two works in such a small period of time), but could you review The River and the Demon for me? I'm not 100% sure what I think of it yet, and I've come to trust your opinion. :D
Thanks!
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Could you please review something for me. Pretty please, with an apple on top.

Here is the link.
I spy!




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iGlamour-Done!
CarbonCore-Done!
Apple-Done!

Thank you all for the request. Hope I helped =D
Last edited by Shearwater on Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Yo. 'Sup Punk? 8)

Fancy reviewing this for me please, Punk?

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There's a bucket full of fish heads in it for you. Please and thank you!

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I'm so calling you Punk form now on.
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Skins-Done!

Alright, I'm up for another review. =)
Remember, one at a time because of NaNo.
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Hi there Pink :)
I've actually avoided posted something on here for a while, due to guilt, you giving reviews so nicely and all. :)

BUT, I'm in dire need of a review for something I posted the other day, something I never received any feedback on. :/

So, here it is:

Untitled (maybe Saturday Mornings?)

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THANK YOU SO MUCH.
And I will get you back one. :)


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You can review this whenever you have the time because of NaNo: post782578.html#p782578

But if you don't...TIGER NINJAS!

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Persephoneia-Done!
TIGERSPRITE-Done!

Claim your spot before someone else. :3
I only have time to do one review at a time. lol =D
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I'd be very greatful if you'd review this for me. :D
Link: topic71727.html


Thank you! ^_^
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Someone-Done!

Alright, free for the next :3
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Can you review this for me in General Fiction Novels?
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Thanks
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will you please review
my short story Fatal love
and the fire bird: here are the links:
(you might have already reviewed firebird so if you have ignore please)
viewtopic.php?t=71430 < fatal love
novel.php?id=717 < firebird

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I will review in return since I'm low on points
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Megsug-Done
Pointe2drama-Done.

Kay, ready for one more.
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