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Hey, can you review [September Contest] It's What I Do? Please and Thank you!
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UltraViolet-Done!

I'm free for more! :D
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Howdy, Pink. 8)

Could you be extremely kind and review my novel for me... It's kind of long, but I'm hoping you won't mind too much. It's called A Shot of Arrogance and it's in the Romantic novels forum.

novel.php?id=510 - Here's the link.

I've just edited the beginning of it quite a bit and would love for an opinion on the newish version. It has eight chapters altogether so far. I know it's quite a lot, but I will be perfectly happy to review a novel of yours in return. I'll probably do that anyway... I'd feel guilty otherwise. :lol:

Thanks so much!
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No problem, I'll get to it!
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Hi Pink,

I hear you're a reviewin' machine! Would you mind taking a look at topic69605.html? I would really super duper appreciate it.
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Lynlyn-Done.

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Hola! Can you review my short story? It's for the September contest, and I'd love your opinion on it:

The Artist
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"




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Wariofart-Done!
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Hey there Pink! If you could please be kind enough to make an opinion on E's Diary thanks :]
It's a fantasy novel. I just started on it so it would really help if you give me your opinion x]
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.




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lol hey Pink :) Could I ask for a review of my entry for the September Contest, SNAFU? It doesn't have any reviews yet :(

If you're too busy, don't worry about it :3

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Jai-Done!
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Hey! :)

Would you be able to review my September Contest entry? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69678.html

Please don't feel you have to review it by tonight, any time is awesome. :D

Thankyou!




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Kiwisatsuma-Done!
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HI! Will you pretty, pretty, pretty, please review my short story wicked: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69673.html or my poem Poor Mr. Diggs: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69695.html for the contest. Thank you for considering it! If you don't have time to do it tonight or can't do both, I promise I won't send evil penguins to slap you in your sleep. I won't even be mad at all. :smt001




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GirlInTheMirror-Done!

Sorry I didn't have time to review your poem last night, I fell asleep :(
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