Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

Hiya, Pink, Coco here! Remember me?

I've been kinda awol lately what with school and stuff, but I'm back in YWS world now. I've used the spare time that I now have in abundance to go back and completely revamp my whole story [well, when I say story I mean the 10 chapters that I already posted]. I'd be super dooper greatful if you could check out the changes I've made and give me your honest opinion on them. Take as long as you need though, no rush

Of Loss and Love: chapter 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html

Thanks a bunch!

*coco

*Coco-Done!

Thanks for the request, I'll slowly review your next chapters
If there's one I missed, don't hesitate to post again lol

I'm open for reviews! Anyone??

Anyone? I'm starving... haha

Wow. So empty ;_;

How do you feel about reviewing a Fantasy Novel? If you agree, the link is in my signature. And it's called Luna. Thanks in advance.

Thanks for the request, I'm working on it right now
I'll update as I finish

Luna
Chapter 1.0:*Reviewed
Chapter 2.1:*Reviewed
Chapter 2.2:*Reviewed
Chapter 3.1: *Reviewed
Chapter 3.2: *Reviewed
Chapter 4: *Reviewed
Chapter 5: *Reviewed
Chapter 6.1: *Reviewed
Chapter 6.2: *Reviewed
Chapter 7: *Reviewed

~Pink

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I want an extremely honest opinion, don't hold back. =]

Bondgirl-Done!
Danie, I think I'll be done with all your chapters by tomorrow.

I still have a lot of time to spare, so if anyone would like a review, please do post

Okay, I'm all done with PinkAngel's novel so I'm ready to take more requests!

Hey Pink

Could you review this for me please?
It called Blood in the Sunrise.

Thanks very much!

Pudin.junidf-Done!

Anybody else? I'm freee~

Pink,
I'm sorry but I don't know how to post a link. I'm technically dysfunctional.
I want you to review The Masquerader Chapter 2 in General Fiction Novels.
Sorry again, Megsug

Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this short story for me? Thanks!

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Megsug-Done
Blackbird-done

Wow, I'm fast