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Hullo Pink. Would you mind taking a look at this for me?

Thanks very much. (:




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Daddyo!

Will you review this for me? Thank you very much in advance. :D
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Have I asked for a review here before? My memory is bad. Anyway:

Can you please review this poem for me Pink? It's for a contest, so I need some feedback. Thanks in advance!

Tiger
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Ah, it seems like you have a lot of reviews pending right now. Whenever you get the chance, take a look at mine please?
Title: Comatose
Genre: Romantic/Fantasy

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Thank you! I really appreciate it. And please take your time. It honestly doesn't matter to me when you post the review. (:

-Lindsey
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Hello! :) I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my story, When the Sand Runs Out? Thanks so much!
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Please review one of my writings (preferably All I Know of Hate) and I'll return the favor! :)




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Thanks Pink for the review! I really appreciate it.
I only had a few questions for you to answer based off of your reply. Whenever you get the chance, I would love if you could answer them for me to help clarify some misunderstandings. Thanks so much!
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Hello, Pink. :)
I've read some of your reviews before, so I thought it would be nice to get your opinion on my own work. I currently have only two pieces up, for either of which I'd appreciate a review. Um, both can be found directly in my portfolio. Nothin' fancy.
Much love,
Bunny
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Hello Pink!
Could you please have a look at this for me.
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Thank you very much!
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Hey Pink! :)

If you have some free time, would you mind please taking a look at this?
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Really appreciate it! Thanks! :)

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hey Shear!
I noticed I hadn't had a review from you in a while so I decieded to ask for one.

Its my new novel The magi
I'm very proud of it and would LOVE a review from you :)

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please and thank you :)
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Hello :) Just wondering if you could help me out, It would be greatly appreciated.

A Glimpse of Death - General Fiction (short Story)
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Hey, Pink.

I know you're busy-no rush. Could you review this? I don't want much of it to be reviewed, just like a normal review. I kept it simple on purpose.

Know I'm Here(Prologue)

Thanks.
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I am now free to take up more request. ^^
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